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102. Raven Crown Chapters 10, 11 and 12
Episode 1026th March 2026 • Creative Spiritual Journey • Judy Cooley and Ghia Cooley
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A murdered guardian. A stolen sapphire. A raven with opinions.

Brie must gather the Jewels of Tambor—learning courage, cunning, and a strength she never knew she possessed—all while braving a twisted foot, a lack of trust, and impossible odds. Meanwhile, Dogmar, known as Jackal, will do anything to claim the throne…until a stolen jewel begins to unravel everything she believes about strength and survival.

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Chapter 10, Jackal.

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I crouch next to the sea cliff

and watch the ship sail away.

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It's been some time since

anything has made me happier.

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For now, at least I am free of my father.

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Of course, if I come across any

dragons that recognize me, my

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whereabouts will be sent to my

father in Ultan via carrier pigeon.

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still, I don't have to see the man

or hear him bellow for the next few

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weeks, at least, my nostrils flare.

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All I have to do is find those stones.

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The men searched into the night,

but didn't locate the girl.

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Now it's up to me.

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I look around with disgust

at the dingy forest.

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By the jewels.

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The girl has scampered

like a rodent into a hole.

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I grip my teeth and wonder

how best to catch a rodent.

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brie.

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I lean against a tree with my cloak

tight around my shoulders and stare

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out to the sea through the morning fog

gray sits slumped elbows on his knees,

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his hands buried in his thick red hair.

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When I see the dragon

ship, I nudge him silently.

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We watch it go after some time?

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Grace speaks.

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What shall we do?

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Good question.

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I've been wondering the same thing.

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I could gather the chickens and

goats manage at the dugout alone.

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I know I could, but when the

dragons return a what then?

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I think of the leather bound envelope

in Nona's bundle of all the years she

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spent gathering information about the

jewels, and now that that knowledge

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is mine, can I find them without her?

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The question weighs me down until it

dawns on me that my ability to complete

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the task has nothing to do with it.

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I can't just sit here, succeed or not.

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I've got to try.

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I'm going to ultan.

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I blurt out.

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Gray looks at me like I'm crazy.

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Come on, Raven.

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Ultan is miles from here.

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Your foot will never make it.

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I'm annoyed that Greg keeps calling

me Raven, but the idea that he thinks

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I can't get to Ultan is infuriating.

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I will too.

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Make it, but as I say the

words, I feel slightly sick.

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One bad infection in my foot,

and I'll lose my whole leg.

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Literally, if the infection

were to spread, it could kill

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me, but I hold my resolve.

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I'm perfectly capable of

taking care of myself.

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Do you even know how to get to Ultan?

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I have known as Map I Snap.

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Once again, I feel a paying

of doubt for the love of rats?

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Can I get there?

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With just the map, I groan

knowing I should have paid more

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attention to Nona's lessons.

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Even still, I jet out my jaw.

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Nona and I were on our way to

find the jewels of Tambor so

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that we could stop Reagan thorn.

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Now that she's gone, it's up to me.

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Gray looks confused.

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What are you talking about?

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I explained about the jewels and how Nona

believed they could prevent Reagan thorn

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from putting a puppet queen on the throne

And when exactly is this Coronation?

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Gray asks On the next full moon,

he shakes his head but doesn't

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comment about the lack of time.

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And do you believe anyone who finds these

gems and lives by their whatever it is,

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vibration will have some kind of power?

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Gray asks with obvious skepticism.

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don't act like I'm crazy.

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Nona was the one who told me,

and she didn't exactly say power.

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She said you could

commune with the whisper.

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I mean, the hesperian

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Grace sits silently and I see

him trying to work things out.

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Ma and PA must have believed

all this, or they wouldn't have

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been willing to follow Nona.

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But why didn't they ever tell me?

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I feel some satisfaction knowing

I'm not the only one that was

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kept in the dark, probably because

they didn't want me to find out.

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There's some connection between

the stones and my parents.

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Nona refused as usual to

give me an explanation.

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Come on, Raven.

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I've worked in the gem pits.

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All my don't call me raven.

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I snap.

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gray holds out his hand

in a placating fashion.

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Look, I've heard that some of the old

digger wives use crystals in healing

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remedies, and I think most diggers would

agree gems have special properties.

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But this vibration thing, I don't think

I'm going to find the jewels of tambo.

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I cut in and I'll get them to

ultan no matter what you think.

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Gray's eyes flick towards my foot.

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I know what he's thinking in a huff.

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I stock towards the bundles there.

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I pull out Nona's map.

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It's drawn in black ink

on brownish oil skin.

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I kneel to unroll it on the ground.

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I am here.

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I mumble pointing to a small X on

the northern coast and Ultan is.

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I run my finger down the coastline here.

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I stop beside the largest harbor in

Tambor, devastated by the distance.

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Gray comes up beside me quickly.

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I roll up the map, not wanting

him to know just how far it is.

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I'm going with you, he says.

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Why I demand gray crosses his arms

over his chest because someone has

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got to keep you out of trouble.

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I glare at him until the stern

line of his lips turns into a

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sheep dog grin, gray's grin.

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I turn away before

relief shows on my face.

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Well, I would never admit it.

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Gray has gotten me out

of more scrapes than one.

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I would be glad to have him

along, even if I don't like it.

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Come if you want.

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I say just don't slow me down.

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I glance around.

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First, we need to lighten Nona's bundle.

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Gray kneels beside me as I

rummage through the contents.

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I hate leaving anything of Nona's

behind, but taking all of her

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belongings isn't practical.

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I question a heavy book

covered in Kaf skin.

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I remember when Nona bought

it from the Banjara Pedler.

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I'd like to leave this.

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It's written in the ancient language,

which is gibberish to anyone except Nona.

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That's not true.

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Grace says some of the

older Banjara can read it.

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He's right.

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Nona used to discuss the

translation of certain words with

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the Pedler when he passed through.

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While not all of the words are the

same as the Banjara native tongue,

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he was able to clarify some of

the meanings in the LXi gloss.

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The book Nona used as a

translation reference.

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Still, I don't see the point in

lugging such a heavy book when

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it's nearly impossible to read Yet.

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What about Nona's reason for everything

As I'm pondering the question, I

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notice the symbol embossed on the

cover and my mouth drops open.

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It's the strange moon symbol, the

one inked on Reagan thorn's forearm.

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I flip open the cover.

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I can't read the ancient language,

let alone pronounce it, but the word

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written on the first page stands

out like a blister on a big toe.

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Corvex corona.

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I say astonished.

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That's what Reagan Thorn said.

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After picking up the ruby, I wet my lips.

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Could I translate this

book if I really tried?

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no doubt.

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Nona's LXi Gloss is in the

envelope, but I hate translation.

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there's a twinge in my gut, and once

again, I know that I should have paid

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more attention to Nona's lessons.

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I slammed the book closed.

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We're keeping this, I go back

to searching Nona's bundle,

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her pouch of flint and steel.

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I drop into my own bag.

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Next I find 16 beeswax candles.

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keeping to, I put the rest aside.

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Sure.

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I won't need more.

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I find an exceptionally

heavy pair of stockings.

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To my amazement, I discovered that one

of them is filled with silver shekels.

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Where did she get those gray asks?

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I shake my head in disbelief.

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There seems to be no end to the

things Nona kept hidden, and

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I thought I knew her so well.

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I put the stockings aside and

continue searching her bundle.

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Nona has an extra tunic and shirt.

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I'm wondering if I should trade

them for my own worn clothing.

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When I find Nona's Red Paisley shawl,

my eyes sting at the side of it.

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The shawl was Nona's favorite.

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I lifted to my face, but instead

of soft folds, I find a hard lump.

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Startled.

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I shake it out, something drops

to the forest floor, my lips part

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and my eyes open wide Beside me

in the leaves is another stone,

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chapter 11, Brie.

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I pick up the honey colored jewel.

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Nona had two.

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I gasp.

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Gray leans close.

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What are you talking about?

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Look, I show him the stone.

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It's uncut like the ruby, but larger.

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I clutch it to my chest, wondering

if it will speak to me, if it

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will help me know what to do.

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Gray must be sufficiently impressed

because he doesn't say a word.

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I wait but hear nothing sense, nothing.

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I let my hands drop to those

who can feel its power.

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I suppose this jewel is of incredible

worth, but to me it's just another stone.

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I'm disappointed, but not surprised.

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This isn't the first time I've

waited for inspiration and gotten

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nothing yet as I hold the gem,

I feel a surge of determination.

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Just because I can't feel the

vibrations doesn't mean I'm useless.

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Surely a little of known as preparation

has rubbed off staring at the envelope.

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I set my jaw.

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I'll study, I mean, really study

anything to keep Reagan thorn from

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destroying more of what I love.

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Wondering what Nona would do.

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I glance around.

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An idea comes to me with a

small knife hanging at my waist.

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I carve a notch in my staff.

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gray, looked surprised.

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What'd you do that for?

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Last night was the full moon.

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I've only got 28 days until it's full

again, I'm going to keep track of time

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by cutting a notch for every day that

passes Can't you just watch the moon?

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yes, but sometimes it's hard to tell an

almost full moon from the real thing.

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This will ensure that I get it right.

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I'm confident Nona would approve.

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I return my attention to her bundle

and find her old wooden comb.

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It's of no use to me with all

the trinkets tied in my hair.

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I am setting it aside.

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When a noise causes me to grab my

staff, I'm in a fighting stance.

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When the sound registers and I

snort, show yourself you Manji, bird.

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There's a rustle of feathers.

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as grim swoops out of the

tree landing in front of me.

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Despite the fright he caused,

I'm elated to see him.

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He must be happy to see me as well

because he bows his head and lets

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me dig my fingers into the rough of

feathers at the back of his neck.

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I should have known you to escape.

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I say as I scratch.

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I hope he poked old Reagan thorn

in the eyes before he left.

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Sh I cut gray off.

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Something in the forest

has caught my attention.

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I wait.

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Then I see it.

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A lone figure walking through

the trees some distance off.

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One of the dragons has stayed

behind fear coils in my gut.

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I hope our voices haven't carried.

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Let's go.

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I mouth gray nods.

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I tie the stone in Nona shawl

and stuff it into my bundle.

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There's no time for sorting now,

so I gather everything, even the

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items I already plan to leave behind

and cram them into Grazes bundle.

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It makes his load huge, but he'll manage.

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Now what I want to study the map,

read some of Nona's papers, make

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a plan, but we have to move now.

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With a blink.

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I recall Nona heading northeast.

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She must have known of a jewel in

that direction with a quick motion.

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I signal gray to follow me and

take off on an animal track

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through the thick underbrush.

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Hoping it will make us hard to follow

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jackal, curse the rodent, I think

as I crawl through another thicket.

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While I learn to track with

the dragons, it isn't my forte.

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Only the long strands of blonde hair

snagged in the bushes assure me I'm on

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the right course when late afternoon

proves to be more of the same.

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I wise up to her game.

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There must be an easier way.

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I check the course of the sun.

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So far she's been heading northeast.

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The only thing in that

direction is the village of ska.

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Even if she's going somewhere else,

she'll need to stop there to resupply.

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I could take a more direct

route and arrive first.

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Then the Dragon Station there

could enlist his men to find her.

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Of course, it may take some persuasion

to convince the dragon he should help.

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But persuasion is my specialty.

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I leave the thicket and blaze my own way.

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Brie just before dark.

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I stop to watch our trail.

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When I'm satisfied we

aren't being followed.

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I find an opening in the thicket

big enough to camp and sag.

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Wey gray drops his bundle and

runs an arm across his face.

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Was taking all those animal

trails really necessary?

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Only if you don't want to get caught.

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I reply gray flops to the ground.

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It was miserable.

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He groans.

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Let's hope the dragon feels the same way.

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I say while digging in Gray's bundle.

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There I find Nona's Small Cook Pot.

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If you're not too tired, we

need some water for supper.

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I hold out the pot.

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We are beside a small rocky

stream in a part of the

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Norwood I've never been before.

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Under normal circumstances,

I'd be elated to be here.

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But tonight it makes me despondent.

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Soon we'll be out of the Norwood for good.

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with a grunt.

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Gray gets to his feet.

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I knew he could rouse himself

for food while he's gone.

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I light a small fire with only the driest

twigs to keep the smoke at a minimum.

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When gray returns, I place a

flat rock on each side of the

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flame and balance the pot on top.

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As the water heats, I drop in

sun dried mushrooms and zucchini.

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Then add carrots, onions, and a

little salted fish Grim arrives,

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obviously wanting supper.

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Shoo, I say flinging a hand at him.

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There isn't enough for you.

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He flops into a tree and looks down on us.

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as we wait for the stew to cook.

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I remove my boot and

begin rubbing my foot.

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The inside edge is so painful.

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I suck in a breath as I touch it.

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Easy does it?

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Girl, I whisper.

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If I were at the dugout, I'd

stay off of it for a day or

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two, but that isn't an option.

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Tomorrow will be more of the same.

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Soon the stew is bubbling

like a little bird.

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I prefer small meals throughout

the day, but as I've hardly eaten

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recently, I'm certain I could

eat the whole pot by myself.

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I remove the stew from the fire and

hand gray, a wooden spoon with relish.

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He digs in.

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I follow suit, but

pause and smack my lips.

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needs a little spice, don't you think?

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Tastes fine to me.

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Grace says and shovels

in another spoonful.

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Slow down.

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This is all the food

we have for the night.

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Make it last.

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He stops with the spoon

halfway to his mouth.

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This is it.

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I don't answer as I dig in his bundle.

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Ah, here we go.

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I unie the string on a large linen bag

and sprinkle a good amount of reddish

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orange capsicum powder into the pot.

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That should do I taste the soup again?

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Hmm.

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Much better.

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Gray resumes, his greedy eating,

but stops after a couple of

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bites to grab his water skin.

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I watch an amusement after a few gulps.

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He forces a laugh.

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Did you set fire to my mouth on purpose?

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Maybe it will teach

you not to eat so fast.

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Grace Snorts still up to

your old Raven Tricks.

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I see.

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I know Gray is referring to the pranks

I used to play on him when we were kids.

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I roll my eyes.

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I'm not a Raven.

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I say and continue eating.

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after a couple more bites, the burning

in my own mouth is quite intense as well.

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Maybe I did put in too much capsicum.

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I say drawing a cooling

breath across my tongue.

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gray, sees the beads of sweat

forming on my forehead, and

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gives me his sheep dog grin.

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You better watch out, or one day

you'll kill someone with that stuff.

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I stifle a laugh and almost choke.

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I don't think so.

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Well, who knows?

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Maybe and just like that, despite

my resolve to never trust him again.

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I'm being all chummy with gray.

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Grim still sitting in the tree, makes

a T totalling sound as if he approves.

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I glance at the bird, don't comment

on things that aren't your business, I

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want to say, but I keep my mouth shut

After we've eaten, I would like nothing

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more than to lie down, but I can't.

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Not yet.

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Chapter 12, Brie, I

open known as en envelope.

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There has got to be something here that

will tell me where to find the jewels.

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I search the stack of parchments ignoring

anything written in the ancient language,

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which is more than half the documents.

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when I come across a parchment

penned in Nona's hand, I get

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excited, Look, here's a list.

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I'm about to read it out loud,

but the first word stops me

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while my reading isn't bad.

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It's not that great either.

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After a moment, I figure it out Sapphire.

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I say golden yellow as the sun.

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I look at gray.

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Who's more familiar with gems than I am.

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Aren't sapphires blue?

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Gray nods usually, but they

come in other colors as well.

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I unie the stone from Nona Shawl,

so this must be the sapphire I

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say rolling it in my fingers.

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After a moment, I drop it into the folds

of my skirt and look back at the parchment

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Characteristics I read carefully to

get the words correct, wisdom, balance,

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knowledge, spiritual development.

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Intellect stimulates

concentration and peace of mind.

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I pause and look at gray.

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Those words describe Nona,

don't you think he nods?

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Do you suppose with the stone in her

possession, she absorbed its essence.

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Gray looks doubtful.

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I've worked in the gem pits all my life.

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I don't think I've absorbed anything

from the stones, but if the jewels

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of Tambo are flawless, that

would make them more powerful than

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ordinary gems, don't you think?

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Gray shrugs.

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I look back at the stone in my lap.

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I don't know why, but

it makes sense to me.

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At these words I blink,

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Is it a coincidence that I feel as if,

if understand I pick up the sapphire

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and roll it in my fingers again, or

am I under the influence of the stone?

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It beats me, but anything that

makes you smarter is a good thing.

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Grace says, his eyes twinkling.

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very funny.

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I reply after returning

the sapphire to my lap.

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I look at Nona's list again,

Ruby, I continue reading.

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Beat red Characteristics, encourages

passion and a zest for life.

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Balances the heart and instills

confidence and goodness.

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Pero Green as new grass.

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Characteristics, unknown location.

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See Porras letter.

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I stare at the last word, what

letter and who is Zipporah?

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I flip through the papers until

I find a yellowed parchment

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signed with the name Zipporah.

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The body of the letter is written

by an inexperienced hand, so it's

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hard to decipher, but I scan the

lines for anything that stands out.

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One particular word catches my

attention, partly because there is

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a large ink splat next to it, and

partly because it seems familiar.

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Naja, I say aloud looking at gray.

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Do you know that word?

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Yeah.

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He says Fremont told us about a Ram

wa where the mabu worship a snake.

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God called Naja.

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I frown.

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What's a ram?

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Wat gray scratches his head.

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Do you know the word monastery?

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Everything snaps together then.

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Yes.

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And now I remember Fremont's story.

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Let's see if the Ram Wat

is marked on the map.

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I unroll the oil skin while gray stirs

the dying embers to produce more light.

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Together we scan for the Ram Wat of na.

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There it is.

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I point to the barely legible

words that have been written above

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the village labeled Sir Pesca.

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Nona wrote it in herself.

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Grace says, must mean

the Ram Wat is important.

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I draw an excited breath and look.

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It's in a northeasterly direction.

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From the dugout, I run my finger

from the ex to Nona scribbled word.

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My mind races like a swallow after a gnat.

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Does this mean the Pero

is at the Ram Wat of Naja?

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Gray looks thoughtful.

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It's possible, but why wouldn't she just

write the location on the parchment?

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Maybe she wasn't sure.

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I hold my finger to the map.

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Guessing at the distance we travel today

and figuring how far we would have to go.

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It will take us two days to get there.

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I say.

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Three minimum gray

replies giving me a look.

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let me worry about my foot.

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I snap gray size and changes the subject.

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Do we have enough food?

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I am not sure.

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Let's see.

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Gray and I dig through our bundles

until we find all the food.

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Three days worth, I say No way,

a day and a half at the most.

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Grace says with a frown,

how much do you eat?

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Clearly more than you think.

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He glares at me until finally

the glare turns to a grin.

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I roll my eyes.

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This may be a long trip.

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We seem to have picked up our bickering

right where we left off in the old days.

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Gray must be remembering those

days as well, or he wouldn't

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have such a bemused expression.

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Great eyesight.

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We better be on the lookout for

mushrooms and berries or we'll go hungry.

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Don't worry.

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If there's anything edible

along our way, I'll find it.

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Grace says, I sigh again.

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Every part of my body is tired and I wish

with all my heart that Nona was here.

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The longing must show on my face.

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What is it?

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Gray asks Nona is all I can say.

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Gray reaches out and

puts his arm around me.

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I stiffen at his touch,

but don't pull away.

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What would Nona do if she was here?

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He asks.

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I think of Nona.

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Nona, who always knew what to do.

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She would tell us a story.

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I say in a whisper, then do it.

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Grace says, squeezing my shoulders.

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I push him away.

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No, Come on, you can recite

all of Nona's stories by heart.

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You've heard them a million times.

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I close my eyes.

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Yes, I know Nona's stories.

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She made sure of that,

but I'm not a teller.

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That's Nona's job.

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Come on, Raven.

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It will do you good.

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I'm about to rail on him for

calling me Raven, but the look in

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his eyes reminds me that I'm not

the only one who lost someone.

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Maybe a story would take both

our minds off what has happened.

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I give a slight nod.

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I'll try.

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Gray leans against a tree and

pulls me back against his chest.

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He's warm and a part of me wants to relax

against him, but I refuse pushing away.

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I wrap my cloak around

my shoulders instead.

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It takes some time to get the first

words out, but slowly I begin the tale.

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I know the best.

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The story, Nona always made sound a

little bit different from the others.

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Noona was the only child

of an elderly couple.

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The husband and wife were overjoyed

when she came into their lives.

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I begin.

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The words feel strange in my mouth.

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Nona should be here.

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She's the one that makes

the story sound right.

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I close my eyes and try to

hear her to use the same voice.

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When Noona was only a few weeks old,

Malta, her father wrapped her in a fox

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pelt and took her out to the giant oak in

the center of the village for a blessing.

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I bless you with wisdom and discernment.

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He said in his rough voice.

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I also bless you to be strong

and persuasive of men, but most

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important, I bless you with a heart

that can hear the voice of the His

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Kona's father was a very wise man.

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If a dispute over a goat or a

piece of land arose, the villagers

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would ask Malta for his counsel.

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but they were troubled by the blessing

and mumbled as Malta finished and

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held noona up for the people to see.

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As I speak, the words

begin to flow more easily.

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The story feels warm and

comfortable, and I find myself

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relaxing just a little towards gray.

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When father and baby returned

home, Malta's wife, RA, put her

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hands in the air and wailed, what

have you done to our daughter?

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Malta was surprised.

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He had merely given his

daughter a blessing.

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RA was beside herself, exclaiming

that Malta had cursed their

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daughter, not given her a blessing.

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Daughters should be blessed

to help their mothers and to

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bring children into the world.

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Not to be persuasive of men.

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Ra said Malta frowned and reminded

his wife that he had also blessed

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their daughter to be strong.

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This only brought more whales from

RA, who insisted that men wanted

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beautiful wives, not strong ones.

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Malta grabbed RA around the waist

and pulled her down on his lap.

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in his gentle way, he assured

her that Nama was already

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beautiful just like her mother.

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And he explained that he didn't choose

the words of the blessing, but spoke

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the words given to him by the hesperian.

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I hear gray's breathing,

grow slow and deep.

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I think he may have fallen asleep,

but when I look at him, he gazes back

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at me expectantly, so I continue.

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Ra knew her husband could

hear the voice of the Hesper.

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When other people were baffled by a

problem, Malta would retire to his

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room and always return with a solution.

525

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She had learned to trust her husband's

word yet this time it seemed he had gone

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too far and she sobbed on his shoulder.

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When Malta found there was no consoling,

his wife, he stood and told Ra.

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He would give her a blessing as well.

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With his hands on her head.

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He told her that she would raise a

wise and industrious daughter that

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someday in the eternities would

become a goddess in the blessing.

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Malta told his wife to have

peace and know that through her

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influence, OMA would be wonderful.

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I glance at Gray again to see that

his eyes are closed, but the moment

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I stop talking, they pop open.

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So I go on.

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When Malta finished the blessing, he

kissed his wife on the cray of her

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head and left to attend his duties.

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RA sat still for a time and

pondered what her husband had said.

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How could she raise a daughter

that would become a goddess?

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Yet Malta had said she could.

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Oma began to fuss in her basket.

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RA picked her up and held

the child to her breast.

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Feeling the infant in her arms

filled her with so much love.

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It overflowed

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And tears began to roll down her

cheeks and splash on Kona's face.

547

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The baby looked up at her mother

and RA saw deep into her eyes.

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She knew at that moment that Nicona

would indeed become a goddess one day.

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ra, whispered in the baby's

ear that she wouldn't tell the

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other women about the blessing.

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They would just be jealous

and think her a fool.

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Malta's words would be a secret.

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I only know how to be

a mother and a friend.

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RA said, I don't know how to be

a goddess, but Malta says, I can

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teach you what you need to know.

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I'll do my best.

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I stop at the rasp of Gray's breath.

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This time he has fallen asleep.

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I give him a push and he

topples over onto his bed.

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Roll there.

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He grumbles and starts to snore.

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I wrap my cloak tighter

and lie down myself.

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I'm so tired.

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I should fall straight

to sleep, but I don't.

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One particular worry keeps

circulating in my mind.

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What will I do when I

reach the Ram Wat of Naja?

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