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For this episode, Kate is joined by Eric Jay Dolin, the New York Times-bestselling author of 17 books, to talk about his writing process and what it’s like to build a career as an author of popular histories. His books include Leviathan: The History of Whaling in America; A Furious Sky: The Five-Hundred-Year History of America’s Hurricanes; Black Flags, Blue Waters: The Epic History of America’s Most Notorious Pirates; and Rebels at Sea: Privateering in the American Revolution.
His most recent book is The Wreck of the Mentor: A True Story of Death, Despair, and Deliverance in the Age of Sail. His books have won awards and are frequently named best books of the year. Before writing history books, Eric worked in environmental policy and earned a PhD in environmental policy and planning from MIT.
We talked about how his career has developed, the ups and downs of the book market, and he dished about advances, career trajectories, and why he thinks he’d rather have a huge book now than early in his career.
Eric Jay Dolin, The Wreck of the Mentor: A True Story of Death, Despair, and Deliverance in the Age of Sail
Samuel Eliot Morison, The Maritime History of Massachusetts, 1783-1860
Erik Larson, Isaac’s Storm: A Man, a Time, and the Deadliest Hurricane in History
James Truslow Adams, The Founding of New England
Welcome back to the Drafting the Past podcast.
Kate Carpenter:I'm your host Kate Carpenter, and in each episode, I interview
Kate Carpenter:a historian about how they research and write their books.
Kate Carpenter:I don't know about you, but I've always been curious about the
Kate Carpenter:careers of authors of popular histories, and I've wanted to
Kate Carpenter:know how they write so many books that are eagerly snatched
Kate Carpenter:up by readers. So I was delighted when Eric Jay Dolin
Kate Carpenter:agreed to join me on the podcast.
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Thanks for having me on.
Kate Carpenter:Eric is the New York Times best-selling author
Kate Carpenter:of 17 books. 17! His most recent book came out this summer,
Kate Carpenter:called *The Wreck of the Mentor: A True Story of Death, Despair,
Kate Carpenter:and Deliverance in the Age of Sail.* His books have won awards
Kate Carpenter:and are frequently named best books of the year. As you'll
Kate Carpenter:hear, before writing history books, he worked in
Kate Carpenter:environmental policy and earned a Ph.D. in environmental policy
Kate Carpenter:and planning from MIT. I was eager to hear from Eric about
Kate Carpenter:how he thinks about his writing and his career as a popular
Kate Carpenter:historian, and he certainly had a lot to say about it, so let's
Kate Carpenter:get right to it. Here's my conversation with Eric Jay
Kate Carpenter:Dolin.
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: When I was a kid, I wanted to be Jacques
Kate Carpenter:Cousteau when I grew up. I was really into marine biology. I
Kate Carpenter:lived on the edge of Long Island Sound, and I was a super serious
Kate Carpenter:shell collector, seashell collector. I mean, so serious
Kate Carpenter:that when I was a senior in high school, I wrote a 150-page paper
Kate Carpenter:on the mollusks of Long Island Sound. Two chapters, two
Kate Carpenter:chapters of which got published in a malacological journal. So I
Kate Carpenter:was really into seashells. I was really into marine biology and
Kate Carpenter:didn't think at all about being a writer. I wanted to be a
Kate Carpenter:malacologist or a marine biologist. I went off to
Kate Carpenter:college, and I came up against hard science and lab science,
Kate Carpenter:and I realized that I liked reading about science more than
Kate Carpenter:I liked doing it. So I shifted to environmental policy. I
Kate Carpenter:decided I wanted to be a professor of environmental
Kate Carpenter:policy, so I wanted to get a, I have an undergrad in biology and
Kate Carpenter:environmental policy. I have a master's in environmental
Kate Carpenter:management, and I have a PhD in environmental policy and public
Kate Carpenter:policy. But, and don't worry, I'm getting to the writing part.
Kate Carpenter:I was always writing on, I was always writing on the side. I
Kate Carpenter:was writing op-eds. I actually wrote a couple of short books on
Kate Carpenter:environmental topics and stuff like that. But then when I was
Kate Carpenter:at MIT, where I got my PhD, I decided I didn't want to be a
Kate Carpenter:professor anymore, and I'd spent all this time getting this
Kate Carpenter:degree. I almost dropped out, but I decided that okay, let me
Kate Carpenter:finish it. I didn't apply for a single teaching job, and the
Kate Carpenter:reason I didn't apply for teaching jobs is I love
Kate Carpenter:teaching, and I actually TAed quite a few courses, and I I
Kate Carpenter:taught a couple of courses completely at MIT and another
Kate Carpenter:university. I like teaching. I like talking to students. I like
Kate Carpenter:dealing with that. I didn't like the kind of writing I knew I
Kate Carpenter:would have to do to get tenure at a university, and I wasn't
Kate Carpenter:too fond of the academic politics. So anyway, I got out
Kate Carpenter:of MIT. I didn't apply for a single teaching job, but I had
Kate Carpenter:to figure out what to do. I was married, and I did environmental
Kate Carpenter:policy for about 11 years. I worked-- If you saw my resume, I
Kate Carpenter:couldn't keep a job. I mean, I worked for, I worked for the
Kate Carpenter:EPA. I worked for the National Transportation Safety Board. I
Kate Carpenter:worked for the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration.
Kate Carpenter:I worked for the Marine National Marine Fisheries Service. I
Kate Carpenter:worked for the National Wildlife Federation earlier. I worked on
Kate Carpenter:Capitol Hill for a senator. I was all over the place, but all
Kate Carpenter:while I was doing all of that, I kept writing op-eds, articles, a
Kate Carpenter:couple of books. Actually, one of my books earlier books called
Kate Carpenter:"Political Waters" is about the cleanup of Boston Harbor, and
Kate Carpenter:that's based on my dissertation. And then in the late 1990s, I
Kate Carpenter:told my wife Jen. I said, "Listen, I'd like to be a writer
Kate Carpenter:full time." And she said, "Okay, why don't you try writing for
Kate Carpenter:the government first?" And I I got a job writing accident
Kate Carpenter:reports. I didn't really like it. Then we moved up to
Kate Carpenter:Massachusetts. I worked on fisheries stuff. I was always
Kate Carpenter:writing on the side. And she told me at one point, she said,
Kate Carpenter:"If you can, if you can save a year's worth of your salary, you
Kate Carpenter:can quit your job to try this writing thing. So it took me
Kate Carpenter:about seven or eight years, and then one night while we're
Kate Carpenter:watching House on TV, the TV show, my wife says, "You can
Kate Carpenter:quit your job. She had been keeping an account for me, and I
Kate Carpenter:I quit my job four weeks later, and I've been a writer since
Kate Carpenter:2007. I'm not trained as an historian. I've taken very few
Kate Carpenter:history classes. Each book I write is sort of like getting a
Kate Carpenter:PhD-not a PhD, a master's degree-in the topic. And I spend
Kate Carpenter:most of my time reading about that topic, and I bounce around
Kate Carpenter:a lot of topics. But I naturally fell in with maritime policy for
Kate Carpenter:the maritime history, for the most part, because of my
Kate Carpenter:background and my love of the ocean, I live in Marblehead.
Kate Carpenter:I'm talking to you from the third floor of our house, which
Kate Carpenter:was built in 1753, which is right very close to the water. I
Kate Carpenter:spent a lot of time on the beach. I'm not a sailor, but
Kate Carpenter:anyway, that's how I got into writing. Just a side of all the
Kate Carpenter:careers I've had, of all the things I've done, of all the
Kate Carpenter:jobs I've had, the thing I enjoyed most about all of my
Kate Carpenter:jobs was the writing. So I figured, well, maybe I should
Kate Carpenter:try doing this full time. And I don't recommend it. Writing's a
Kate Carpenter:miserable job if your number one goal is to make money. If you
Kate Carpenter:want to be satisfied and happy, and you're you know, and you're
Kate Carpenter:lucky, then it's a it's a great job. And I've had a good career,
Kate Carpenter:and I've had great support from my wife, and I have to give her
Kate Carpenter:a lot of credit because I couldn't have been a full time
Kate Carpenter:writer without her support. And she works because I didn't want
Kate Carpenter:to be a starving writer. I wanted to live the life I wanted
Kate Carpenter:to live. So it's all worked out. That's that's the long, that's
Kate Carpenter:the short, long story of how I got into writing. And I will add
Kate Carpenter:that anybody listening who wants to be a writer, the I think the
Kate Carpenter:number one. There are a couple of traits that you need to have
Kate Carpenter:to be a good writer, at least of books. I think the most
Kate Carpenter:important trait. I know people are going to argue with this,
Kate Carpenter:but I think the most important trait is well, it's combination
Kate Carpenter:having drive, being a little neurotic perhaps, because it's
Kate Carpenter:hard to write a book. You have to have real drive, but you also
Kate Carpenter:have to be able to accept failure. I can't tell you how
Kate Carpenter:many would-be writers I've spoken to over the years who
Kate Carpenter:dread getting rejected. I got rejected so many times. Just get
Kate Carpenter:used to it. Let it roll off your back, and you know, keep going.
Kate Carpenter:And eventually, if you are a decent writer and you have a
Kate Carpenter:decent topic, you'll find a publisher, but or an agent. But
Kate Carpenter:that's just the beginning of it. There are hundreds of 1000s of
Kate Carpenter:books published every year. The number of those authors that
Kate Carpenter:actually make what you would consider an okay living is
Kate Carpenter:vanishingly small. So if you're going into writing and you want
Kate Carpenter:to make a good living, you want to make six figures a year
Kate Carpenter:consistently. You're picking the wrong career unless you're
Kate Carpenter:incredibly lucky because it's maybe 1% of the writers are are
Kate Carpenter:doing that on an annual basis or even fewer. So you have to know
Kate Carpenter:why you're getting into writing if you love it and that's really
Kate Carpenter:what you want to do. You're going to figure out a way to do
Kate Carpenter:it, but it's getting harder and harder to make a living because
Kate Carpenter:publishers are focusing more and more on people who have big
Kate Carpenter:platforms and a lot of followers and and celebrities and even
Kate Carpenter:though books are doing pretty well, what I see happening and I
Kate Carpenter:don't have the statistics to back this up, but I'm pretty
Kate Carpenter:sure it's true, is that a smaller and smaller percentage
Kate Carpenter:of huge best-selling books are well. They always have made the
Kate Carpenter:bulk of the money for the big publishers, and I just think
Kate Carpenter:it's being exacerbated. I think if you looked at a big
Kate Carpenter:publisher, and my publisher is Norton, it's an independent
Kate Carpenter:publisher. It's pretty big. I bet if you looked at them that
Kate Carpenter:let's say they published 100 books a year, I bet five books a
Kate Carpenter:year are making 90% of their profits, or 10 books maybe. So
Kate Carpenter:that still leaves room for other people to write books. But the
Kate Carpenter:Authors Guild, of which I'm a member, did a survey back in
Kate Carpenter:2019, and if I remember correctly, you know, the average
Kate Carpenter:full-time writer was making 25 or 30 $1,000 a year. You can't
Kate Carpenter:raise a family, live a life on on that. So I'm not trying to be
Kate Carpenter:a downer. I'm just trying to be realistic. I can't tell you how
Kate Carpenter:many people ask me out to coffee and they want to be writers, and
Kate Carpenter:you can see the dollar signs behind their eyeballs. And I'm
Kate Carpenter:going to write a big book, and I'm going to be Stephen King or
Kate Carpenter:whatever, or David McCullough.
Kate Carpenter:You just need to have, like any career, you need to have a sense
Kate Carpenter:of perspective and reality. But I do believe. I still do believe
Kate Carpenter:that you're driven, and you are pretty talented, and you got
Kate Carpenter:some good ideas, and you've got a good support system that you
Kate Carpenter:can make it as a as a writer. It's just it's just tough job.
Kate Carpenter:It's toughest job I've ever had, but it's the best job I've ever
Kate Carpenter:had. But right now, it's not a good time to be asking these
Kate Carpenter:questions because I'm trying to come up with another idea for a
Kate Carpenter:book, and I keep going through ideas and keep shooting them
Kate Carpenter:down. I think I got an idea, but I don't know. By the end of the
Kate Carpenter:year, I want to be. I'm sort of like a dog without a bone. I
Kate Carpenter:need to be working on something. But then again, I'm 64 years
Kate Carpenter:old, and my wife, as I said, put aside a year's worth of my
Kate Carpenter:salary. The reason for that is because I read in writers'
Kate Carpenter:market, and sort of common sense is if I failed as a writer, I
Kate Carpenter:wanted to have a cushion so I could look for another job. So
Kate Carpenter:that amount of money that I put aside for a year's worth of my
Kate Carpenter:salary is still there in its own little account. I haven't
Kate Carpenter:touched it, but I told my wife, I'm 64. If I fall flat in my
Kate Carpenter:face, I am not getting another job. Sorry, I'm going to be out
Kate Carpenter:in the backyard mowing the lawn, taking care of the fish, doing
Kate Carpenter:this. So the pressure is sort of off. So I'm looking around for
Kate Carpenter:an idea, but that's after many years of work and and writing.
Kate Carpenter:And I used I used to have black hair. Now I have gray hair.
Unknown:It's all because of
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Kate Carpenter:What what draws you to a topic? I mean, how do
Kate Carpenter:you decide if something is going to be a good book,
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: well, the first, the most important thing is sort
Kate Carpenter:of aha, that's a great topic in my my own mind. If I think it's
Kate Carpenter:if I think it's really exciting and interesting, then that's a
Kate Carpenter:good start. But then that's only the beginning. I also have to
Kate Carpenter:think that my or should convince my agent to some extent if you
Kate Carpenter:know he thinks it's a good idea. And then we have to go to a
Kate Carpenter:publisher. I mean, for my last nine books, I've been with the
Kate Carpenter:same publisher. That makes it a little easier. My proposals are
Kate Carpenter:not nearly as long now as they used to be when I was starting
Kate Carpenter:as a writer. But still, I've had I've had ideas that I thought
Kate Carpenter:were great shot down, and I haven't written them because I
Kate Carpenter:didn't want to go to another publisher. And even if I did,
Kate Carpenter:who knows if I'd find somebody because they need to. People
Kate Carpenter:need to be convinced that it's going to sell decently, not that
Kate Carpenter:it's going to be a huge bestseller, but that it's maybe
Kate Carpenter:going to have a good shot of selling 10,000 hardcover copies.
Kate Carpenter:That's sort of the baseline for a major publisher. But most
Kate Carpenter:books sell fewer than 10,000 copies. Even a lot of books
Kate Carpenter:published by major publishers, they they don't always get it
Kate Carpenter:right. It's sort of like gambling. You go into a casino
Kate Carpenter:and you hope for a win, and you don't always get one. So so it's
Kate Carpenter:sort of convincing a couple of people. But most important is
Kate Carpenter:me. Is this an exciting topic? Do I think a lot of readers are
Kate Carpenter:going to be interested in this? Does this relate to my core
Kate Carpenter:demographic or the people that have been reading my books in
Kate Carpenter:the past, so there are a whole bunch of considerations that go
Kate Carpenter:into it. But I will counterbalance that with there
Kate Carpenter:are a number of topics that I've passed on for a variety of
Kate Carpenter:reasons, mostly because I thought the topic was written to
Kate Carpenter:death, and then somebody comes along and writes a book on it,
Kate Carpenter:and it's a bestseller. So I don't, you don't want to trust
Kate Carpenter:my judgment. I'm actually. I'm being sort of serious. I've
Kate Carpenter:gotten to the point where I don't want to do this book or
Kate Carpenter:whatever. But you know what? It could be a huge bestseller, and
Kate Carpenter:I'm just discounting it for my own reasons. But that's all you
Kate Carpenter:can. That's all you can rely on is your own judgment and a sense
Kate Carpenter:of what the market is. But I'm just amazed at how many people?
Kate Carpenter:How many more books can we have on George Washington, Abraham
Kate Carpenter:Lincoln, the Civil War, the American Revolution? I mean,
Kate Carpenter:there are hundreds of 1000s of books written on these topics,
Kate Carpenter:and I'm sure people keep finding stories. And I'm not trying to
Kate Carpenter:diss those things because I've written about the American
Kate Carpenter:Revolution and the Civil War in in some of my books. But still,
Kate Carpenter:how much more new stuff can we find out about these famous
Kate Carpenter:celebrities that people love to, or politicians, people love to
Kate Carpenter:read book after book on them. And I'm probably the one that's
Kate Carpenter:wrong. I'm probably could pick. There are a number of famous
Kate Carpenter:people that I said, "Oh, I'd love to write a biography of
Kate Carpenter:that person. But there have been five biographies written in the
Kate Carpenter:last 30 years. Well, another writer might look at that and
Kate Carpenter:say, well, I'll give it my own spin. And there are tons of
Kate Carpenter:people out there who obviously love to read about George
Kate Carpenter:Washington, Abraham Lincoln, you know, battles in the Civil War,
Kate Carpenter:World War II battles, and there's still more that haven't
Kate Carpenter:been plumbed or survival stories in the Arctic. I mean, like my
Kate Carpenter:last book, Reckon Mentor: Survival story in the Pacific
Kate Carpenter:Ocean, but the wreck of the Mentor, my last book, and the
Kate Carpenter:one before that, Left for Dead. Nobody's written a book about
Kate Carpenter:those except for one in the last 100 years. So those really were
Kate Carpenter:new topics. But other books I've written on the fur trade, on
Kate Carpenter:whaling, on pirates, there are dozens, scores, hundreds of
Kate Carpenter:books on those topics, and I still chose to go ahead with
Kate Carpenter:them. So you never know.
Kate Carpenter:Well, I want to ask you some practical questions
Kate Carpenter:about your writing process. So I am, as I'm talking to you, you
Kate Carpenter:are sitting in what looks like a beautiful office with lots of
Kate Carpenter:great art behind you. Is this where you like to do your
Kate Carpenter:reading and writing?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Yeah, well, not all my reading. I do a lot of my
Kate Carpenter:reading when it's nice weather outside in our backyard or on
Kate Carpenter:the beach. But if I need to take notes, I'm in front of my
Kate Carpenter:computer, which I am now. And yes, this is my office. It's the
Kate Carpenter:third floor of the house, and those are paintings. I, for many
Kate Carpenter:years, still to a minor degree, I was a big collector as a kid.
Kate Carpenter:My mom was an antique dealer. I collected so many things:
Kate Carpenter:shells, rocks, stamps, coins, old TV guides, history books,
Kate Carpenter:and for a while I was collecting. Every year I'd buy a
Kate Carpenter:couple of miniature paintings, and that's what you see behind
Kate Carpenter:me. I probably have 60 of them now. Miniature paintings,
Kate Carpenter:miniature sculptures, because we run out of space. We have a lot
Kate Carpenter:of artists in our family. My mom was an antique dealer. Our house
Kate Carpenter:is chock full of stuff. My kids call it the museum, and it's
Kate Carpenter:just my it's my personality. So yeah, I'm up here. I love this
Kate Carpenter:place because, as I said, that our house. I don't know if I
Kate Carpenter:mentioned our house was built in 1753. It's pretty old. It's in
Kate Carpenter:very good shape. But the floorboards, if you could see
Kate Carpenter:them, I mean, we have 24 inch wide pine floorboards. Not all
Kate Carpenter:of them are 24 inches, but it's an old nails and five
Kate Carpenter:fireplaces. It's a wonderful place to write about history.
Kate Carpenter:But the thing that I love the most about this room is not this
Kate Carpenter:room. It's what's to my right that you can't see. This room
Kate Carpenter:has its own bathroom, and in that bathroom is an old clawfoot
Kate Carpenter:tub, and I love to take hot baths. My wife hates baths, so
Kate Carpenter:this is my little hideaway. And in the winter, when it's cold, I
Kate Carpenter:take a lot of baths. I just sit there and I read, or I watch a,
Kate Carpenter:I watch a documentary, or I just think I love it. And I know
Kate Carpenter:people are going to listen to you waste a lot of water. It's
Kate Carpenter:really not that much water. We save water in a lot of other
Kate Carpenter:ways. In fact, the local water department has often asked, "How
Kate Carpenter:many people do you have living in the house? Two. They say you
Kate Carpenter:use hardly any water, so we're still we're conserving in other
Kate Carpenter:areas, but not in the bathtub.
Kate Carpenter:When do you like to do your writing?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Oh, it's it's very variable. There's sometimes
Kate Carpenter:when I write for weeks on end, seven days a week. Especially my
Kate Carpenter:wife does a lot of travel, so when she goes away, I tend to do
Kate Carpenter:a lot of writing. But there are also when I'm researching, I'm
Kate Carpenter:not really writing, and that can take many months for a book. You
Kate Carpenter:know, 789, months where I'm just reading and taking notes. But
Kate Carpenter:when I start writing, there are some days that go great. There
Kate Carpenter:are other days where I do not a lick of writing. You know, it
Kate Carpenter:all depends on what writers are fond of saying. You need to
Kate Carpenter:write every day. That's baloney. If you need to write every day
Kate Carpenter:to keep your writing skills up, you have a problem. If you need
Kate Carpenter:to write every day because it's just coming out of you so at
Kate Carpenter:such a rapid rate, you need to write, and that's more like
Kate Carpenter:fiction writers. Then fine, I'm I'm okay with that. But there
Kate Carpenter:are times where weeks go by, whether I'm traveling or
Kate Carpenter:something else is going on, or I have to do gardening out back.
Kate Carpenter:I'm a huge gardener, or I I just I'm just stumped for a little
Kate Carpenter:while. I don't know, but I would say the average, I wake up and
Kate Carpenter:I'm usually in front of the computer by eight in the
Kate Carpenter:morning, and I'll work till lunch, and then I'll have lunch,
Kate Carpenter:and then I'll work till four or five or six. Well, four or five
Kate Carpenter:usually, because my wife, one of the deals we made now that I'm a
Kate Carpenter:writer and she has a very hard job and works a lot of hours, is
Kate Carpenter:I make all the dinners. Now we often go out to eat too because
Kate Carpenter:I'm not the greatest cook, and I have like six dinners that I'm
Kate Carpenter:good at. But so I usually kick off and I cut the vegetables and
Kate Carpenter:I make food at around five, and she gets home at usually 630.
Kate Carpenter:But I have a lot of time to write during the day because she
Kate Carpenter:leaves work for work very early, and she travels a fair amount.
Kate Carpenter:So, but there's no direct. I'm not one of those people. Oh, you
Kate Carpenter:got to be writing by 8o'clock or 9o'clock. You got to write till
Kate Carpenter:five. If something's really flowing and it's really
Kate Carpenter:exciting, there are times, especially when my wife's away,
Kate Carpenter:where I can work 1213, hours and pump out 4000 good words. You
Kate Carpenter:know that's a lot. Then there are times when I write a
Kate Carpenter:paragraph, and my wife used to make fun of me. I'd come
Kate Carpenter:downstairs. I say, "I wrote a good sentence today. I wrote. I
Kate Carpenter:wrote a good paragraph today. So, and then you go back and
Kate Carpenter:editing. Editing's fun. I like editing too because you sort of
Kate Carpenter:have the basic thing, and you're like a like chiseling marble,
Kate Carpenter:making it hopefully making it better. But then there comes a
Kate Carpenter:point where I just get tired of what I'm working on, and I just
Kate Carpenter:want to hand it in. So I'm very good. I'm very good with
Kate Carpenter:deadlines. I have contracts, and they have deadlines, and I meet
Kate Carpenter:my deadlines, or I I hand in my books before they're due because
Kate Carpenter:one I get bored after if I'm working on something for too
Kate Carpenter:long, and two I want to get paid and I you know I don't but most
Kate Carpenter:you'll find that an awful lot of authors I don't know if it's
Kate Carpenter:most but a lot of authors blow right by their deadlines. It's
Kate Carpenter:very common in this business,
Kate Carpenter:what systems do you have for organizing your
Kate Carpenter:research and notes?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Basically, what I do is on Microsoft Word on my
Kate Carpenter:computer, I just have different files for each chapter. I know
Kate Carpenter:roughly, I know the outline of my book, the chapters, and I
Kate Carpenter:have different. So I'll say chapter one, and I just dump, I
Kate Carpenter:cut and paste information I find on the internet. I scan books
Kate Carpenter:and documents, and I cut and paste them PDF documents or
Kate Carpenter:images. I just put them in these files in order, and then when I
Kate Carpenter:the file gets too big, I do chapter one, part two, chapter
Kate Carpenter:one, part three, chapter one, part four, and sometimes I end
Kate Carpenter:up with seven or eight different files, each with 100 megabytes
Kate Carpenter:of information in a word document, which is a lot. A lot
Kate Carpenter:of them are pictures, though. So I have all the information in
Kate Carpenter:the chapters, and then I read through all that information. I
Kate Carpenter:add to it, and I start to collate, and I pull from that
Kate Carpenter:when I'm writing the chapters. Okay, I remember I'm writing
Kate Carpenter:about X. Oh, I remember reading about X. It's in chapter one,
Kate Carpenter:file four. I go find it, and I do a search. See, when I put
Kate Carpenter:pictures in the files, you can't search a picture, so I always
Kate Carpenter:put a little one-sentence description of what's in that
Kate Carpenter:picture, so I can do a search through a 150-page document to
Kate Carpenter:find oh quote you know xenon's quote or whatever I don't know
Kate Carpenter:whatever. So that's that's mainly what I do. I I read a
Kate Carpenter:lot. I take photocopies I scan. I take pictures. I write down
Kate Carpenter:notes. I have links if it's online, and I try to organize it
Kate Carpenter:based on the outline of the book. And then I just start
Kate Carpenter:plowing through and writing the book. And invariably, I have to
Kate Carpenter:find more new information. I get new documents. I add them. In
Kate Carpenter:fact, one of the things I'm going to do when I get off the
Kate Carpenter:phone is my computer, despite the fact I have this computer
Kate Carpenter:with a lot of memory. I am butting up against the memory,
Kate Carpenter:the the disk, the RAM, or whatever-not the RAM, the just
Kate Carpenter:the memory on the computer. So I'm going to go through some of
Kate Carpenter:my older books, and I have files. For example, I download
Kate Carpenter:PDFs of books from the internet, from Google. Books or other play
Kate Carpenter:those take up a lot of space. So for some of my older books that
Kate Carpenter:I wrote 1015, years ago, I might have gigabytes worth of
Kate Carpenter:information. I don't know that are just 300 books that I
Kate Carpenter:downloaded in newspaper articles. Well, at this point, I
Kate Carpenter:don't need them again. I'm not going to write about that again,
Kate Carpenter:and I can always gather the information again. So I have to
Kate Carpenter:go through and clean up my computer because it's starting
Kate Carpenter:to go slower, and it's a very old computer. I mean, it's 2019,
Kate Carpenter:I think, which is getting old. My laptop's old, so I need to
Kate Carpenter:think about in the next year because I'm starting. I can't
Kate Carpenter:get updates anymore because my computer's not advanced enough,
Kate Carpenter:so things are slowing down. But that's appropriate because I'm
Kate Carpenter:slowing down too. So you know, maybe maybe I will slow down at
Kate Carpenter:the same rate as my computer, and then we'll both turn the off
Kate Carpenter:switch, and that'll be it.
Kate Carpenter:Where where in your research process do you
Kate Carpenter:start writing? I
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: basically start writing when mentally I feel I
Kate Carpenter:have enough information to write to tell the story I want to
Kate Carpenter:tell. There's no hard and fast time. It's not a sudden eureka
Kate Carpenter:moment. It's just okay. I've taken enough notes on this. I've
Kate Carpenter:read enough books, enough articles. It's time to write.
Kate Carpenter:And sometimes I make a mistake, and I have to go back and do a
Kate Carpenter:lot more research. But most of the time, I just start writing,
Kate Carpenter:and I still do research while I'm writing because new things
Kate Carpenter:come up. I mean, part of the process of writing is when you
Kate Carpenter:start to put it down on the page. You understand. You find
Kate Carpenter:new connections. You find new information. You you say, "Oh, I
Kate Carpenter:didn't think about it that way, and or or or you write a quote
Kate Carpenter:from this person and you say, "That's interesting. They
Kate Carpenter:mentioned this in the quote. What really is that? And did
Kate Carpenter:they say anything else about that? Or did somebody else, a
Kate Carpenter:contemporary, say something about that? So you sort of build
Kate Carpenter:up the story as you go. So it's not as if research and writing
Kate Carpenter:are totally compartmentalized. I do a heavy bout of research for
Kate Carpenter:probably six months, where I'm not writing at all, just
Kate Carpenter:gathering information. In a sense, that's the easiest time
Kate Carpenter:because with all my education and background, especially my
Kate Carpenter:PhD, I'm very good at gathering information. It's not-I don't
Kate Carpenter:have to memorize all of it. I just have to know that I have it
Kate Carpenter:and that I can look at it later. So it's kind of fun. I go to
Kate Carpenter:libraries. I do random searches online. It's like you know,
Kate Carpenter:bouncing around. It's sort of a fun time, but then once I have
Kate Carpenter:all the information that I think I need, I start writing the
Kate Carpenter:book. But then, while writing it, I realize I need more
Kate Carpenter:information, and I go back to libraries, I go back places, and
Kate Carpenter:I, you know, I'm still finding new information at the end of
Kate Carpenter:the writing process because you know, new new connections pop up
Kate Carpenter:in my head.
Kate Carpenter:I'm curious. You you kind of mentioned chapter
Kate Carpenter:outlines earlier. How do you think about narrative structure,
Kate Carpenter:and and maybe you can use like the structure of the wreck of
Kate Carpenter:the mentor as an example?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Well, it's kind of easy when you're writing
Kate Carpenter:nonfiction. Not easy. I I tend to be chronological, but what
Kate Carpenter:you'll see in most of my books, they have a loopback mechanism.
Kate Carpenter:The introduction will be an exciting, dramatic story from
Kate Carpenter:somewhere in the book, usually not the beginning of the book,
Kate Carpenter:and then I okay. I've just told you this exciting story. Now I
Kate Carpenter:have to loop back to give you the history. And occasionally
Kate Carpenter:within the book, I have loopbacks, but they're very
Kate Carpenter:clearly demarcated. But for the most part, my books are
Kate Carpenter:chronological. I'm telling a story, so you usually tell a
Kate Carpenter:story in chronological order. So that that does a that does a
Kate Carpenter:great amount of the work in organizing the material. It's
Kate Carpenter:not just a free form. You know, I'm telling a story. It's hard
Kate Carpenter:to tell a story if I suddenly introduce a character that I
Kate Carpenter:haven't talked about before, and then they disappear for six
Kate Carpenter:chapters, and then they they come back. So you need to the
Kate Carpenter:the narrative arc of the story is sort of built into the tale
Kate Carpenter:you're telling, but that's still you still require there's still
Kate Carpenter:work that you have to do. The biggest thing that a writer has
Kate Carpenter:to do, I think, of history, unless you have a topic that has
Kate Carpenter:almost no background, which Wreck of the Mentor had less
Kate Carpenter:background than a lot of my other books, but still had a
Kate Carpenter:lot, you know, contemporary documents, but for the most
Kate Carpenter:part, almost any topic you find in history, you're going to have
Kate Carpenter:more information out there than you could possibly include. So
Kate Carpenter:one of the biggest skills that a writer needs is knowing what to
Kate Carpenter:cut, knowing what not to use, knowing when enough is enough,
Kate Carpenter:and not letting better be the enemy of good enough. Any one of
Kate Carpenter:my books I could have worked 10 years on. I get bored, so 18
Kate Carpenter:months, 20 months. I write a book, and then I think about it,
Kate Carpenter:and then I have another contract, and I write another
Kate Carpenter:book. So I'm not a professor, you know. I'm not focusing on
Kate Carpenter:one little area for my entire career, and I'm digging deeper
Kate Carpenter:and deeper. But I'm not again. I'm not dissing books that take
Kate Carpenter:longer, I know there are some great narrative nonfiction
Kate Carpenter:books, history that are very easy to read, are are wonderful,
Kate Carpenter:and I know the authors spent 567, years writing them. It just
Kate Carpenter:that's not how I'm built, unless it was the most amazing topic
Kate Carpenter:that required that amount of effort. I literally could not
Kate Carpenter:see. Working on a book for seven years. The only exception to
Kate Carpenter:that, or even five years, the only exception is if I was
Kate Carpenter:famous enough or the idea was good enough, where there was a
Kate Carpenter:big auction and I got a million dollar advance, then I could
Kate Carpenter:support myself for five years. But that rarely happens, even
Kate Carpenter:for well known authors. You have seven. I once sat next to an
Kate Carpenter:author. I won't mention his name. He's dead now, but I still
Kate Carpenter:don't want to mention his name. Huge best-selling author, won a
Kate Carpenter:Pulitzer Prize, won a National Book Award, historian, and the
Kate Carpenter:book that he-I was sitting next to him. He was hawking his book,
Kate Carpenter:and I was hawking one of my earlier books. This is a long
Kate Carpenter:time ago, before I was a full-time writer, and I was so
Kate Carpenter:in awe of him because I-I knew his name, and he was famous. He
Kate Carpenter:was a famous author. He worked on this book for seven years,
Kate Carpenter:and I was asking him questions. First, I said, "Oh, it must be
Kate Carpenter:great being so famous and winning all these awards. You
Kate Carpenter:can write whatever you want. He laughed at me. He goes, "You got
Kate Carpenter:to be kidding. He wanted to write a book about Greenland,
Kate Carpenter:and his off his publisher said, "No, no. And finally, he pushed
Kate Carpenter:them so much. They said, "Okay, you write a book about
Kate Carpenter:Greenland. We'll give you a $30,000 advance. So he never
Kate Carpenter:wrote the book on Greenland, and he also said to me, he wrote in
Kate Carpenter:my book to Eric, a fellow writer with deepest sympathies, because
Kate Carpenter:because I was asking him questions. I was so naive. I was
Kate Carpenter:probably 35 years old, 40 years old, a long time ago, and I was
Kate Carpenter:so naive.
Kate Carpenter:I said, "Boy, it must be wonderful living your life, and
Kate Carpenter:you're famous, and you make a lot of money. And that's when he
Kate Carpenter:pointed out. He goes, "No, my last book took seven years.
Kate Carpenter:Yeah, I got about a million dollars advance. This is a long
Kate Carpenter:time ago, but seven doesn't last that well over seven years. And
Kate Carpenter:I have an apartment in New York City, and I like the nice life.
Kate Carpenter:And he goes, "It's really tough, and I have to pay my own health
Kate Carpenter:insurance. So he didn't paint a very good picture of being a
Kate Carpenter:writer. So you know, when I pick a topic, it's something I got to
Kate Carpenter:be excited about. Hopefully, I can write in less fewer than two
Kate Carpenter:years, and then move on to something else. And you know,
Kate Carpenter:it's it's it's not it's not a it's not science. It's an art.
Kate Carpenter:It's sort of figuring out what you're interested in? I know I
Kate Carpenter:know tons of stories of writers who had a topic that they
Kate Carpenter:thought was a slam dunk, and their publishers thought it was
Kate Carpenter:going to be a huge hit. In fact, they printed 75,000 advance
Kate Carpenter:copies, and it's a total flop. And they took a huge bath. And I
Kate Carpenter:know other books that the publisher and the writer had no
Kate Carpenter:big hopes, didn't think it was going to do that well, but
Kate Carpenter:thought it was going to do okay. All of a sudden, some celebrity
Kate Carpenter:mentions it or gets a front page New York Times review, which
Kate Carpenter:isn't as important as anymore. It used to be huge. You got a
Kate Carpenter:front page New York Times review. Your book was going
Kate Carpenter:through the roof. I know of a specific book, and again, I'm
Kate Carpenter:not going to mention it. Within the last eight months, it got a
Kate Carpenter:glowing front page New York Times review, and I happen to
Kate Carpenter:know the publisher. They sold 40 copies of that book in the next
Kate Carpenter:week. 40. So I guess the point I'm making is that you, it's
Kate Carpenter:it's really a gambit. It's like walking into a casino. You never
Kate Carpenter:know, but it doesn't mean you know nothing. I mean, publishers
Kate Carpenter:are smart, agents are smart, writers are hopefully smart, and
Kate Carpenter:you can pick books that you know on average do okay. But those
Kate Carpenter:big blockbuster books, half the time people are surprised. It's
Kate Carpenter:kind of wacky. It's such a wacky career. To it's a great career.
Kate Carpenter:It's best thing I've ever done. But it's just it's not like
Kate Carpenter:you're an accountant. You get a job in an accounting firm.
Kate Carpenter:You're a lawyer. You get become a lawyer. You work the federal
Kate Carpenter:government. There's a career track that you're going on. It's
Kate Carpenter:sort of like being a podcaster. Very few podcasters I get
Kate Carpenter:interviewed by do it full time because making a living as a
Kate Carpenter:podcaster is probably harder than making a living as a
Kate Carpenter:writer. But it's the same concept. Any creative endeavor
Kate Carpenter:that doesn't have a clear career track line. It's just creative
Kate Carpenter:work. It's hard to to make a living. I'm not trying to harp
Kate Carpenter:on the money part of it, but you know people need to live. This
Kate Carpenter:is not a we don't have guaranteed income yet. AI hasn't
Kate Carpenter:caused us to have guaranteed income, which I don't think is
Kate Carpenter:going to happen. So people have to live, and I got two kids that
Kate Carpenter:had to go to college, and you know like to do things, and so
Kate Carpenter:you have to think about that. But again, I I will add that
Kate Carpenter:writing is no better or worse than any other job. People have
Kate Carpenter:a very exalted view of writers. They do because I meet people
Kate Carpenter:all the time. They get, oh, you're a writer. That must be so
Kate Carpenter:great. You know, people do surveys of what you could. What
Kate Carpenter:would you want to do if you could do anything? Writer is
Kate Carpenter:often at the top of the list, just like professor. People
Kate Carpenter:think professors are you get your summers off. You get this.
Kate Carpenter:Any job, being a plumber, being an arborist, being a journalist,
Kate Carpenter:being a newspaper, they're all hard. Being a writer is hard,
Kate Carpenter:and it's no better or worse. It has no more value or less value
Kate Carpenter:than any other job. I really believe that, and that's part of
Kate Carpenter:the reason why I don't go to a lot of book festivals.
Kate Carpenter:I have to say that I've been invited to a number of them. I
Kate Carpenter:like other writers. I have some writer friends, but a lot of
Kate Carpenter:writers are just so full of themselves. I can't stand it.
Kate Carpenter:There you go. That's my little secret. I just I I. Just I'm
Kate Carpenter:more of a regular guy that got into writing. I don't view
Kate Carpenter:writing as this. Oh, it's so important. You know, you're so
Kate Carpenter:special when you're a writer. I think fewer nonfiction people
Kate Carpenter:feel that than the few fiction people I've met. Who knows?
Kate Carpenter:Maybe I'm all washed up. You know, maybe maybe I'm totally
Kate Carpenter:wrong, and it's just me and it's how I perceive people. But
Kate Carpenter:again, I can't tell you how many people. And you must have come
Kate Carpenter:across this. I meet so many people that find out I'm a
Kate Carpenter:writer, and they either instantly tell me that they have
Kate Carpenter:a book they want to write, or that must be amazing, or it's
Kate Carpenter:it's so special. Just the other day, somebody you know said,
Kate Carpenter:"Oh, writer, that's such a that's such an amazing career!
Kate Carpenter:You're so lucky. Yeah, I am lucky to be a writer. But again,
Kate Carpenter:I'm no better or worse than the plumber that comes does unclogs
Kate Carpenter:my toilet. In fact, he's more useful. I have a PhD, and my
Kate Carpenter:wife says you have a PhD, but you don't help anybody, which is
Kate Carpenter:true. Maybe I help people through books. I like to think
Kate Carpenter:that my books, you know, give some enjoyment to people and
Kate Carpenter:help them learn a little bit about history. So I don't think
Kate Carpenter:I'm totally useless, but
Kate Carpenter:well, I want to talk about your books a little
Kate Carpenter:bit because you know one of the things I find so engaging about
Kate Carpenter:your books is that you know they're really they're built, of
Kate Carpenter:course, from archival sources like all history and nonfiction.
Kate Carpenter:But in your books, those sources sort of fade in the background.
Kate Carpenter:They're there, of course, in the notes, but you know you're not
Kate Carpenter:constantly quoting from them or referencing to them. You're sort
Kate Carpenter:of just telling the story. How do you think about translating
Kate Carpenter:sources to your own voice into scenes?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Yeah, well, if you look at my earlier books,
Kate Carpenter:they had a lot more quotes, and one of the complaints of one of
Kate Carpenter:my early editors was say it in your words, not their words,
Kate Carpenter:unless their words are so amazing you have to include
Kate Carpenter:them. So it's sort of been beaten into me, and I think
Kate Carpenter:that's right. I think that people want to read more of your
Kate Carpenter:words. It's smoother, but good quotes are excellent. I love
Kate Carpenter:quotes. I still use a lot of them. My attitude again is that
Kate Carpenter:the reader is trusting me to synthesize or extrapolate or
Kate Carpenter:extract or rewrite or paraphrase the quotes and tell the story
Kate Carpenter:accurately? I'm not writing an academic book with 1000
Kate Carpenter:footnotes and blocking up. One of the things is a lot of books
Kate Carpenter:like mine they don't have the footnotes in the the numbers
Kate Carpenter:aren't in the page. You just have it by page number, and
Kate Carpenter:that's to make it less imposing. I mean, some of my books have
Kate Carpenter:won academic awards because I think they're deeply researched.
Kate Carpenter:But it's not a PhD dissertation, and I don't want to be-I don't
Kate Carpenter:want it to be dry as dirt. And I want people to read it. And I
Kate Carpenter:think a lot of people get intimidated if there are too
Kate Carpenter:many footnotes, too many endnotes, too many numbers in
Kate Carpenter:there, and use too many big words unnecessarily. I just
Kate Carpenter:think a simple tale told in a straightforward way that also
Kate Carpenter:has a lot of information in it. Because I think one of the
Kate Carpenter:things a lot of people say about my books is they learned a lot,
Kate Carpenter:and that's because I want to learn a lot while I'm writing
Kate Carpenter:them. And there's a lot of information back in there. Some
Kate Carpenter:people love it, some people hate it. You can look at any one of
Kate Carpenter:my books and all the comments on Amazon or other other places.
Kate Carpenter:And some people rave about it. Give it five stars. This is
Kate Carpenter:amazing. It's so easy to read. I learned so much. It was
Kate Carpenter:effortless. I couldn't put it down. And then the same book,
Kate Carpenter:you can have somebody say, "This is this is horrible. It's very
Kate Carpenter:slow. He keeps repeating himself. Like somebody made a
Kate Carpenter:comment the other day on one of my older one of my books, and I
Kate Carpenter:really thought about. I try not to look at comments too much
Kate Carpenter:because you know, hey, everybody's got an opinion now.
Kate Carpenter:But this guy, he was online and he was videotaping. He gave my
Kate Carpenter:book, my pirate book, three stars, and his complaint was too
Kate Carpenter:much information, and he repeated himself a lot. I wrote
Kate Carpenter:the book and I thought about it, and I almost responded to him,
Kate Carpenter:but I decided not to. I didn't repeat myself anywhere in the
Kate Carpenter:book. They're totally different stories. Each each chapter is a
Kate Carpenter:different pirate or whatever. I really didn't repeat myself. I
Kate Carpenter:know what's in the book, but people see what they want to
Kate Carpenter:see, and they have their own chips on their shoulder. So
Kate Carpenter:another piece of advice to writers who are listening to
this:don't spend too much time reading your reviews, whether
this:they're professional reviews or the run-of-the-mill reviews by
this:average readers, unless you know read the good ones makes you
this:feel good. And I've been fortunate; I've written a lot of
this:books. I really have never gotten a pan review. I've gotten
this:some reviews that aren't stellar, they're good. But I've
this:been really fortunate with professional reviewers. I've
this:gotten a lot of good reviews. My books have been picked on a lot
this:of best of books, and I think people generally who read my
this:books like my books. The problem is billions of people haven't
this:read my books.
Kate Carpenter:Well, that is a problem,
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: and there are so many books written. It just-it's
Kate Carpenter:a flood. I don't know how people keep up. I don't know. I always
Kate Carpenter:ask bookstore owners, "How do you pick books? There are so
Kate Carpenter:many books, wonderful books. Every week, there are hundreds
Kate Carpenter:of books coming out from major publishers and big presses, and
Kate Carpenter:they're all good, I'm sure. How do. You pick as a reader too. It
Kate Carpenter:is it is wild. It puts it in perspective. You know, I guess
Kate Carpenter:if somebody I've never sold millions of copies of a book. I
Kate Carpenter:imagine if you sell millions of copies, boy, you think you're
Kate Carpenter:really finding a good audience. That must must be a different
Kate Carpenter:feeling. But even me, an average you know writer, a upper mid
Kate Carpenter:list writer that occasionally has a bestseller. Lots of people
Kate Carpenter:read my books, books the libraries. Lots of people check
Kate Carpenter:them out. I know for the wreck of the Mentor, somebody just
Kate Carpenter:wrote to me in this one big library, New York Public
Kate Carpenter:Library, a while ago. They had like they have 40 copies or
Kate Carpenter:something of my of the book, and and there's a wait list. It's
Kate Carpenter:very nice to hear that, but you really have to put yourself in
Kate Carpenter:perspective. There's so many good books, and I absolutely do
Kate Carpenter:not believe that the books that are the best sellers that it's
Kate Carpenter:natural selection, and they are the ones that deserve it
Kate Carpenter:necessarily. There are probably 100 other books that don't get
Kate Carpenter:much attention or more that are just as good by any metric you
Kate Carpenter:want to pick, but for whatever reason they didn't have the
Kate Carpenter:right review. They didn't. It's not quite the right topic. They
Kate Carpenter:didn't have the right promotion. I don't. I don't know. But there
Kate Carpenter:are 1000s of books that come out every year in history that are
Kate Carpenter:wonderful, but only a small number of them do well, and any
Kate Carpenter:writer that tells you that they they don't want their book to
Kate Carpenter:sell well is BSing you or has a huge trust fund and doesn't
Kate Carpenter:care. And there are writers like that. Let me tell you. So
Kate Carpenter:anyway, you need to know what you're getting into. But if you
Kate Carpenter:want to be a writer and you're meant to be a writer, quote
Kate Carpenter:unquote, not that I believe there's fate involved. You'll be
Kate Carpenter:a writer. You'll figure out a way to do it. I know writers
Kate Carpenter:that you know a lot of writers have a regular job and they
Kate Carpenter:write on the side and they write wonderful books and wonderful
Kate Carpenter:articles, but they never quite succeed enough in their writing
Kate Carpenter:to quit their job, and that's fine. In fact, I bet most
Kate Carpenter:history books are written by people who aren't full-time
Kate Carpenter:writers. There aren't a huge number of full-time writers who
Kate Carpenter:actually make a decent living. I'm not talking about a great
Kate Carpenter:living, just a decent, consistent living. An awful lot
Kate Carpenter:of writers of history are professors. They have nice jobs.
Kate Carpenter:They have grad students that can help them do research, and they
Kate Carpenter:can write in the summer or after work. You know, a lot of people
Kate Carpenter:have asked me, "Why don't you teach? I've been asked to teach
Kate Carpenter:at universities writing courses. I just not my interest, and I
Kate Carpenter:don't need to financially. So I I never have taken. In fact, I
Kate Carpenter:told one person they wanted me to go to this writers retreat
Kate Carpenter:and give a course on writing nonfiction. I said, what do I
Kate Carpenter:have to tell them? Obviously, I'm talking a lot. I have a lot
Kate Carpenter:to tell you, but it's more anecdotal stories. I'm not sure
Kate Carpenter:I'd be a good teacher on how to write nonfiction. Like for
Kate Carpenter:example, one thing I don't believe in. I don't think
Kate Carpenter:writer's block is a real thing. I think if you have writer's
Kate Carpenter:block, you don't want to write. If that's stuck and you think
Kate Carpenter:what you write is so important and needs to be so perfect that
Kate Carpenter:you're blocked, then you shouldn't be a writer, because
Kate Carpenter:you know, first of all, perfection is an elusive goal.
Kate Carpenter:Second of all, you can always edit. You know, write craft,
Kate Carpenter:write 100 pages of drivel. Go back; it becomes a little
Kate Carpenter:better, comes a little better, and a little better. So,
Kate Carpenter:well, I wanna I wanna ask you another craft
Kate Carpenter:question because I feel like one one kind of tricky thing about
Kate Carpenter:writing narrative nonfiction is knowing when to really like stay
Kate Carpenter:in a scene and describe it and go into detail and when you sort
Kate Carpenter:of summarize and move the story forward, how do you find that
Kate Carpenter:balance? Do you just feel it out, or do you have methods?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: I don't have any methods. I mean, real literally,
Kate Carpenter:it's I'll be writing a scene and it goes on or part of the story,
Kate Carpenter:and I say, you know, this is too long. There's too much
Kate Carpenter:information here. I'm getting bored. The writer's not getting
Kate Carpenter:the writer's. Reader's going to get lost. So it's just a gut
Kate Carpenter:feeling. But they're they're definitely. I have no method
Kate Carpenter:other than writing and knowing. It's like everybody uses this
Kate Carpenter:quote, and it's sort of silly because it's so old. The Supreme
Kate Carpenter:Court said they couldn't define pornography, but they know it
Kate Carpenter:when they see it. But it's it's the same with writing a chapter
Kate Carpenter:of a book. I sort of know when it ends, and and then I write a
Kate Carpenter:cliffhanger, hopefully something that makes people want to go to
Kate Carpenter:the next chapter. You sort of know when you've spent enough
Kate Carpenter:time. You know, you're if you're writing about people in a boat
Kate Carpenter:out on the ocean for 14 days, you write about those 14 days,
Kate Carpenter:but you don't want to turn each day into free pages of anguish.
Kate Carpenter:You want to get through the story with some high points, and
Kate Carpenter:at some level, there's a balance between having the story go fast
Kate Carpenter:and being exciting, and bogging down the story. And the worst
Kate Carpenter:thing you, the thing you want to avoid, is have a story that's
Kate Carpenter:been going fast all of a sudden, slow down a lot because you
Kate Carpenter:might lose your readers, and that's why that's why writers
Kate Carpenter:spend so much time writing their introductions at the beginning
Kate Carpenter:of the book, because if you don't catch them in the
Kate Carpenter:beginning of the book, they're not going to keep writing. Some
Kate Carpenter:people reading, some people do. My wife will often give a book a
Kate Carpenter:lot. She reads a lot, a lot of fiction, and she'll often give a
Kate Carpenter:book a lot of rope before giving up on it. But you know, I don't
Kate Carpenter:when I when I pick up a nonfiction book, and I don't
Kate Carpenter:read a lot of modern nonfiction books because since I don't have
Kate Carpenter:a history background, each book is like getting a master's
Kate Carpenter:degree, and most of my reading relates to what I'm writing. So
Kate Carpenter:I don't have as much time to write current to read current
Kate Carpenter:bestsellers or current books. So I'm not very good at answering
Kate Carpenter:the question, "What book are you reading now? Because it's likely
Kate Carpenter:to have been written in 1890. But it's really important. I
Kate Carpenter:think I've done a good job with my books. Obviously, not a good
Kate Carpenter:enough job to get more and more readers. But I think all my
Kate Carpenter:books start out. Their introductions are very dramatic,
Kate Carpenter:very exciting. In part because it gets me excited about the
Kate Carpenter:story. I mean, I I pick up a lot of books that all the reviewers
Kate Carpenter:say are great, and they may sell a lot. And I start reading them,
Kate Carpenter:and I go, "This is dry. This is this is. I have to work to read
Kate Carpenter:this. How come so many people think it's so great, but you
Kate Carpenter:know, I'm luckily I'm not a reviewer.
Kate Carpenter:Are there people that you, whose writing you
Kate Carpenter:admire, that you look to as inspiration? They don't have to
Kate Carpenter:be recent.
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Yeah, Samuel Eliot Morison. I happen to have
Kate Carpenter:won the Samuel Eliot Morrison Book Award. That's not why, but
Kate Carpenter:Samuel Eliot Morison, even though some of his writing is
Kate Carpenter:considered controversial today, especially about Christopher
Kate Carpenter:Columbus, given the reevaluation of Christopher Columbus, but
Kate Carpenter:Samuel Morrison, he was a wonderful writer. Especially, he
Kate Carpenter:wrote this book that was really I really enjoyed, and I used in
Kate Carpenter:a couple of my books. is It's Maritime History of New England,
Kate Carpenter:I think it's called, or something of New England. It's a
Kate Carpenter:short book. He had a wonderful way with phrases. He was a deep
Kate Carpenter:academic, he wrote like a fiend. I don't know how he wrote so
Kate Carpenter:many books. He's like Winston Churchill. I mean, he wrote
Kate Carpenter:dozens and dozens of huge books. But he's a wonderful writer. He
Kate Carpenter:writes books that have a lot of information, a lot of historical
Kate Carpenter:accuracy, but in a breezy way that makes you want to keep
Kate Carpenter:reading. So I like him. I like Eric Larson. I've only read two
Kate Carpenter:or three of his books. Mainly, the reason I like him is because
Kate Carpenter:of one of his earlier books, Isaac Storm about the Galveston
Kate Carpenter:Hurricane. I wrote a book on hurricanes, and I used that as a
Kate Carpenter:source. And I really got to appreciate he's a very good
Kate Carpenter:writer, and he really knows how to tell a story and keep the
Kate Carpenter:reader interested. James Truslow Adams, he he won a Pulitzer
Kate Carpenter:Prize like in 1938. He wrote a book called The Founding of New
Kate Carpenter:England, which is was very important to me when I read it.
Kate Carpenter:It was really fun to read. Who are some other readers, writers?
Kate Carpenter:I don't know. I don't read. I I don't read so many. I listen to
Kate Carpenter:a lot of books, and that's different than reading it. I
Kate Carpenter:don't know. A lot of the books behind me that you see, you
Kate Carpenter:really can't see them. They're behind my head. Almost all those
Kate Carpenter:books in that bookshelf are books I blurb. So by definition,
Kate Carpenter:I liked a lot of those books because I I haven't blurbed a
Kate Carpenter:lot of books I've been asked to. Because if I don't like a book,
Kate Carpenter:I'm not going to blurb. And there are some writers who write
Kate Carpenter:blurbs for books and basically don't read the book. I've been
Kate Carpenter:told that by other writers. I'm not making that up. I would
Kate Carpenter:never blurb a book that I haven't written, read, and I
Kate Carpenter:would never blurb a book that I didn't like. And I've actually
Kate Carpenter:had a couple of authors who've asked, and not that I don't get
Kate Carpenter:a huge number of requests. Huge best-selling authors get must
Kate Carpenter:get dozens of requests a week. So I don't really have any
Kate Carpenter:others. Not horrible, David McCullough. Okay, David
Kate Carpenter:McCullough. I've read a number of his books. I like them,
Kate Carpenter:Theodore Roosevelt. I read a couple of his old books; they
Kate Carpenter:were fun. He's really, he's really, he's got a way with
Kate Carpenter:writing. What a writer! I mean, he wrote so much, and he was
Kate Carpenter:president of the United States. And just these people are at a
Kate Carpenter:different level. These people write all that stuff, especially
Kate Carpenter:Winston Churchill. Man, was he! I love his story. I love him as
Kate Carpenter:a character, celebrity, a politician, and he's very
Kate Carpenter:important in world history. And I wish we had more Winston
Kate Carpenter:Churchills, but we don't. But he he was a good writer at one
Kate Carpenter:point. He was the highest paid freelance journalist in the
Kate Carpenter:world. Part of that's because he was famous, but some of that was
Kate Carpenter:before before he became prime minister. He's just an
Kate Carpenter:interesting guy. I don't know. That's enough names. I I'm
Kate Carpenter:really bad on that because I know there are other nonfiction
Kate Carpenter:writers who make a point of reading a lot of other current
Kate Carpenter:books. I just don't.
Kate Carpenter:Besides editors, are there people you turn to for
Kate Carpenter:feedback on your work?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Yeah, my wife. She's my first reader. She used
Kate Carpenter:to call herself the comma-kaze because I was very bad with
Kate Carpenter:commas. I'd put commas all over the place, and she'd have to
Kate Carpenter:take them out. I'd gotten better, so my wife reads it. My
Kate Carpenter:kids, my daughter, she's a literary agent. If she want, she
Kate Carpenter:has time to read it. I ask her to read it, but she's very busy.
Kate Carpenter:My editors, a couple of friends I have, some that are
Kate Carpenter:historians, some that aren't. I asked to read it. My
Kate Carpenter:mother-in-law, before she unfortunately she died a week
Kate Carpenter:ago, but she was great. She was a great reader. She was a big
Kate Carpenter:booster of my work. So that's it. You know, not a huge store,
Kate Carpenter:not a huge number of people. My editors, there are multiple
Kate Carpenter:editors. I give it to my main editor, then it goes to a copy
Kate Carpenter:editor, then it goes to a line editor, and they're fact
Kate Carpenter:checkers. I've had one book. It had to go to. A lawyer, because
Kate Carpenter:there were some concerns about libel, so I had to rewrite
Kate Carpenter:something. You know, so I've experienced that too.
Kate Carpenter:You've given us a lot of great advice, both
Kate Carpenter:about writing and about the writing life. What's the most
Kate Carpenter:influential writing advice you've ever gotten?
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: It was probably it wasn't it wasn't actually for
Kate Carpenter:writing, but it relates to writing, and I've already
Kate Carpenter:mentioned it. When I was getting my PhD, I was thinking of
Kate Carpenter:quitting, and my wife at the time said, "Okay, you can quit,
Kate Carpenter:but you can never mention it again. And I wasn't man enough
Kate Carpenter:to uphold that. I knew I would complain the rest of my life.
Kate Carpenter:Also, I paid for my master's and PhD, and my parents didn't help
Kate Carpenter:me, so I had a lot of skin in the game. In fact, when my wife
Kate Carpenter:married me afterwards, she would introduce me to her friends.
Kate Carpenter:This is my husband, debt, because I had $42,000 in loan
Kate Carpenter:debt, and this is a long time ago. So that was a lot of money.
Kate Carpenter:It's probably 80,000, like 80,000 or 100,000 today. So, my
Kate Carpenter:PhD advisor, who I will always love because he helped me get
Kate Carpenter:through the program and gave me good advice. He used to say to
Kate Carpenter:me all the time, "Eric, better cannot be the enemy of good
Kate Carpenter:enough. And I've said that before. That advice is very good
Kate Carpenter:because you're never going to achieve perfection. You always
Kate Carpenter:can work on any issue, any writing project longer, but
Kate Carpenter:you've got to have a sense of when it's a good enough book, I
Kate Carpenter:could go back every book I've written. I could go back and fix
Kate Carpenter:it up and re-edit it and make it look a little different because
Kate Carpenter:I've become a better writer or I have new information or I made a
Kate Carpenter:mistake. But it's over. The book's out there. It's over. And
Kate Carpenter:you know, if it's a major mistake, you can correct it if
Kate Carpenter:it gets reprinted. But so don't let better be the enemy of good
Kate Carpenter:enough. And my professor didn't come up with that idea. I think
Kate Carpenter:it goes back to Voltaire or whoever whoever said it. So
Kate Carpenter:that's that's good advice. Also, this is not advice I've been
Kate Carpenter:given, but it sort of right you know rips through all of my
Kate Carpenter:comments so far. I'm a big believer in humility. My friend,
Kate Carpenter:people know me. It's very funny. I very rarely talk about my
Kate Carpenter:writing. People ask me questions; I'll answer them.
Kate Carpenter:Like today, I'm very voluble, but I, you know, I sort of keep
Kate Carpenter:it to myself. I'm sort of an introvert naturally, but I
Kate Carpenter:really think it's important to be humble in whatever career
Kate Carpenter:you're in. Let other people sing your praises. That's fine, but
Kate Carpenter:don't believe your own propaganda either. You know, I
Kate Carpenter:know I'm a good writer. I know I write good books, but I also
Kate Carpenter:know that I'm one of 1000s of good writers, and that doesn't
Kate Carpenter:make me less special or more special. It just means I'm part
Kate Carpenter:of a career, you know, and I'm doing this. And so, in the end,
Kate Carpenter:as a writer, if you don't enjoy what you're doing, if you're
Kate Carpenter:doing it for other people or to get adulation, you're in the
Kate Carpenter:wrong business. Because first of all, it's hard to get adulation
Kate Carpenter:all the time. There are dozens of writers, hundreds of writers,
Kate Carpenter:who had a huge best-selling book and never wrote another book
Kate Carpenter:that sold nearly as well. But that's a very common story of
Kate Carpenter:writers who have a huge bestseller and become famous,
Kate Carpenter:and they never write another big book. I know of a writer who won
Kate Carpenter:a-I won't say which award because it would narrow it
Kate Carpenter:down-won a huge award, sold a huge amount of copies, and his
Kate Carpenter:next three books, each one did worse than the last. And he went
Kate Carpenter:from being with the major, one of the biggest publishers, to
Kate Carpenter:smaller publisher and smaller publisher. And I know it rips
Kate Carpenter:them apart. You know, because when you're on the top of the
Kate Carpenter:mountain, nobody likes to be on the bottom again. So in some
Kate Carpenter:ways, if you if you have a career trajectory, it'd be much
Kate Carpenter:nicer to do well, well, well, well, well, and then have a
Kate Carpenter:great success towards the end. So that's what I'm waiting for.
Kate Carpenter:I've done all my books have done well. Some have done very well,
Kate Carpenter:but I've never had a blockbuster bestseller. I've hit the New
Kate Carpenter:York Times bestseller list, other bestseller lists, but I've
Kate Carpenter:never had a blockbuster. I'm not a. I'm not a. Good Morning
Kate Carpenter:America is not calling to interview me.
Kate Carpenter:I used to have daydreams of John Stewart or Colbert wanting to
Kate Carpenter:interview me about my books, but I'm not at that level, and I
Kate Carpenter:know that. But boy, would it be nice! Now I'm 64. I have a few
Kate Carpenter:more books in me. I'd love it, and I'd know how to handle it a
Kate Carpenter:lot better if I suddenly had a book that became everybody was
Kate Carpenter:talking about. I think it'd be a fun ride. I'm not expecting it
Kate Carpenter:at all, but wouldn't that be fun? I much rather have that
Kate Carpenter:trajectory, or I'm happy with my trajectory, which is unusual. Is
Kate Carpenter:unusual in writing. Ask ask editors. I've talked to editors
Kate Carpenter:and other people in publishing. It's kind of unusual to have 9,
Kate Carpenter:10 books in a row, all of which have done well, have made the
Kate Carpenter:publisher happy, some of which have done very well, and none
Kate Carpenter:have tanked. That's that's a pretty good writing career, I think.
Kate Carpenter:Absolutely. Well, that feels like a pretty
Kate Carpenter:good note to end it on, Eric Doln, thanks so much for joining
Kate Carpenter:me on Drafting the Past. Thanks for being willing to talk about
Kate Carpenter:your writing process.
Kate Carpenter:Eric Jay Dolin: Sure, thank you for having me. Appreciate it.
Kate Carpenter:Thanks again to Eric Jay Dolan for joining me on
Kate Carpenter:the Drafting the Past podcast, and thanks to you for listening
Kate Carpenter:to our conversation. Find links to Eric's newest book, The Wreck
Kate Carpenter:of the Mentor, along with the other books mentioned in this
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