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116. Raven Crown Chapters 31, 32 and 33
Episode 11624th April 2026 • Creative Spiritual Journey • Judy Cooley and Ghia Cooley
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A murdered guardian. A stolen sapphire. A raven with opinions.

Brie must gather the Jewels of Tambor—learning courage, cunning, and a strength she never knew she possessed—all while braving a twisted foot, a lack of trust, and impossible odds. Meanwhile, Dogmar, known as Jackal, will do anything to claim the throne—until a stolen jewel begins to unravel everything she believes about strength and survival.

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Chapter 31, Brie.

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As soon as jackal leaves,

I jump to my feet.

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She's going after the jewels.

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Come on, we've got to find them first.

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There's panic in my voice.

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Brie, wait.

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Gray grabs my hand and pulls me down.

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It's dark.

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Jackal hates the water.

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She isn't going anywhere tonight.

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gray's rational voice calms me.

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Yes, of course you're right.

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I say, but we can't let her

give the jewels to Reagan.

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Thorn My eyes skim across

the deck to Nona's Map.

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We've already entered the Black Canyon.

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there isn't another village along the

river for four or five days as the gorge

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gets too steep for even a digger village.

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I start thinking fast.

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Let's leave tonight.

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We'll take the old boat

tied at the end of the dock.

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Brie.

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Be rational.

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The only way to get there

is with the banjara.

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We can't run the cataracts

alone for the love of rats.

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I'm so agitated that I

start ringing my hands.

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what will Jackal do now

that we know her secret?

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How will we stop her?

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Gray grabs my hands.

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I have an idea.

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We'll set jackal up.

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I'm skeptical how?

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I will steal a handful of shekels from the

till while I'm ladling bitters tonight,

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and you'll hide them in jackal's bag.

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when the Tauk suspects, the coins are

gone, we'll tell Marette it was jackal.

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She'll raise the alarm.

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when the tauk finds the shekels,

he'll leave jackal behind easy.

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Can you steal the shekels

without being caught?

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Gray grins, leave it to me

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With a pat on my shoulder, he gets up.

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I better get back to the bidders or

I'll be the one left behind, but, Raven,

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trust me, for once Gray leaves the boat.

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But I am worried gray isn't naturally

sly like jackal or sneaky like me.

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What if he's caught?

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Am I just supposed to trust

him like I trusted Nona?

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I go back to ringing my

hands, get it together.

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I command myself.

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You're acting like a nervous old hen.

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As a distraction, I pick up

the Pedallers book, which is

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sticking halfway out of my bundle.

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I open the cover to see the word corvex

Corona embossed on the first page.

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Madox mentioned the word again tonight.

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I've tried to look up Corvex Corona

in the LXi gloss before, despite

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how useful the LXi gloss is.

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It isn't indexed well, the translation

is likely somewhere in its pages.

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I just need a roundabout way to find it.

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As I look at the word now, I

remember the Banjara translation,

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which Marette gave me.

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Corvex meaning Raven Corona,

meaning crown, the Raven crown.

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I dig out the LXi gloss and look up

Raven and find a reference to priestess.

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When I look up priestess, I find corvex.

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That's it.

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With excitement, I look up Crown.

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Once again, I find a reference this time

to queen, and queen translates to Corona.

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I sit back.

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Corvex Corona means

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priestess, queen.

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ghia: I sigh.

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It's progress, but

certainly not the answer.

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Percing my lips.

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I look up any word that

relates to Raven or crown.

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I hunt for a long time, but don't

find anything that makes sense.

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I finally give up and

wonder where gray is.

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I expected him back with the by now

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What if he was caught all at once?

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I'm in a panic again.

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I climb to the front of the boat

and pull back the canopy flap.

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There is still a large crowd

of diggers on the dock.

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Marette will wonder why

I am not at my telling.

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Nevermind that.

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Now I've got to find gray.

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I look towards the barrel of bitters,

but he isn't there glancing around.

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I see him in the shadows

by a pile of crates.

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After watching for a moment,

I realize he isn't alone.

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Moving across the boat for a better view.

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I see jackal with him.

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Her hand is in his thick hair,

pulling his head towards her.

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I stop breathing.

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They kiss on the lips.

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The sight hits me like a blow

to the chest immediately.

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I roll backwards and

slip under the canopy.

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Now I know why Gray didn't want

to take a boat and leave tonight.

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He was stalling for time, looking for

a way to get me to trust Jackal again.

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he's liked her since

the first day they met.

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He betrayed me once and

I let him do it again.

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I should have known better than

to think he was on my side.

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They must see me as a complete

feather brain shaking With fury, I

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find my eyes darting around the tent.

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I've got to leave.

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I never want to see jackal or gray again.

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I'll find the jewels alone.

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I start to think fast

considering what I'll need.

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Food and a way down river.

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For starters, I remember the old

boat tethered to the end of the dock.

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It's doubtful anyone will

even notice if it disappears.

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But where will I get food in order

to think I grab my hair and twist

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it in a knot on top of my head.

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The simple action gives me an idea.

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I unie my hair and look

at the snarled mess.

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Yes, I've got my answer hastily.

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I dig in my bundle and pull out

the old wooden comb, which I

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jerk through the tangles, working

around my various embellishments.

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When I've got my hair in a semblance

of order, I drape it over one

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shoulder where it dangles to my hip.

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Before I can change my mind, I

pull the little knife from my waist

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and begin hacking off handfuls

of hair just below my chin.

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I drop the locks into my lap.

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It's not until I'm done that I look at

the giant bird's nest that I've created.

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Please let it be enough.

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I gather the hair and stuff

it into my old stalking.

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Cautiously I peek out

from under the canopy.

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Gray is ladling bitters

to a line of diggers.

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Jackal is on the other end of the dock.

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Past the dancers.

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Clouds have blotted out the

stars, so it's dark except for

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the torches set against the cliff.

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This is my chance.

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I slipped from the boat, cross the

deck, and head up the trail to Nsra.

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with my new boots and my staff.

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I make it up the trail

without too much trouble.

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At the top, I stagger slightly at the

site of the massive village before me.

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How so many people can

live so close together?

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I don't know.

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Just find the Croker's lounge.

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I tell myself, I look around cobbled

streets go off in several directions.

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It could be anywhere.

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I'm debating about which street to take

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When a loud call nearly causes

me to jump out of my boots,

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I slap my hand to my chest.

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Give me a little warning.

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Next time would you, grim doesn't respond.

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He just walks in a wide circle around me.

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I get the definite feeling.

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He's looking at my hair.

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Is it that bad?

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I ask Grim ruffles his feathers,

making them stand up around his head.

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Then he croaks.

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I laugh, no short hair does not make

me look like you now leave me alone

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or help me figure out which way to go.

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Grim takes off, flapping down

one of the cobbled streets.

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I shrug and follow him.

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Checking each sign for the

croker's lounge as I go.

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I've gone several blocks when I

smell the pungent scent of herbs.

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A moment later, I spy the Croker's

lounge and exhale in relief.

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Turns out g Grim was right.

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given the late hour, I assume I'll

have to bang on the door to wake

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the Roker, but that can't be helped.

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I pause, summoning my courage.

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Finally, I grip my teeth and walk up

to the door, only to find it open.

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Chapter 23, Brie.

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I step into the dimly lit croker's

lounge, but can't move any further.

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The only light comes from the tapers held

in a tarnished candelabra on the shelves.

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Behind a wooden counter are rows of

faceless heads draped over them are

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wigs in every style despite seeing

similar wigs in ska, I cringe.

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One wig looks something like an owl's

nest complete with bits of bone.

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Another has the look of a curling

wave dripping with seaweed.

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the room smells of herbs and old

sweat dried plants and roots hang from

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the ceiling as well as pig snouts,

rabbit's, feet, and withered chicken's.

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Heads bottles of all sizes

and colors lined the walls.

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A woman lies face down on a

table in the center of the room.

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Her dress is pulled up to expose the pale

skin of her thigh, which appears to be the

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only place on either leg that isn't inked.

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A man in a black robe is bent

over her with long, pale fingers.

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He dips a needle into a

bottle of reddish ink.

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then he begins tapping the

needle into the skin of her leg.

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After a moment, he turns to me

peering with toad like eyes through

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the pattern of ink on his face.

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Take a seat.

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I'll be with you in a moment.

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he says, with a voice that

sounds like crumbling parchment.

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He gestures with his chin behind me.

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Turning.

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I see a low chair, but

I couldn't possibly sit.

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I look at the woman lying on

the croker's table and see

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spots of blood on her thigh.

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I avert my eyes feeling sick.

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I know how healing is done.

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This isn't it.

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When the Roker is finished, the

woman slides off the table and

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stands, I'll be back next month.

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At the same time.

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She says, smoothing down

her skirt Very well.

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After dropping a few coins on the

table, the woman leaves the lounge.

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What can I do for you?

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The Croker asks, fussing with his tools

instead of looking at me, I step forward.

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My legs trembling like blades of grass.

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I try not to stammer.

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I have some hair to sell.

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let's see.

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The Roker says, holding

out ink stained fingers.

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Gathering my courage.

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I pull the shorn hair from the

stalking and place it in his palm.

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He bounces it as if weighing the locks.

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then his bulging eyes look me up and down.

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I cla my hands together

to stop the shaking.

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After a moment, he places the hair on

the inking table and holds up a finger.

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Wait here.

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I'll be back.

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He leaves the room by a

small door in the back wall.

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his black cloak almost

catching on the latch.

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As he hurries out, my mouth drops open.

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What's going on?

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The lounge is even more eerie.

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Now that I'm alone, slowly I turn.

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Taking in the room.

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When my back is to the wigs and

I'm facing the front door, I notice

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a parchment tack to the wall.

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It is similar in every way to the

wanted poster of Boan in known as

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envelope, but there's one difference.

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The picture in the center is

of a girl with ratty long hair

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that looks very much like mine.

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Below the picture, it reads 1000

Shekels for the Girl and:

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Shekels for the Pero of Naja.

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In a panic.

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I grab my hair off the table and run

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How long until the Croker

finds the dragon stationed here

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and gets back to the lounge.

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I race down the street, The wooden

sole of my boot clomping on the cobbles

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stabs of pain, radiate up my leg.

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When I get to the trail leading down

to the boats, I can see that there

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are still a few diggers on the dock.

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I want to keep running, but flip up my

hood and force myself to a casual stroll.

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I can't look concerned.

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I even manage a fake smile as I walk

up to gray and whisper in his ear.

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I'm going to bed.

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I'll take care of that

business in the morning.

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Gray intent on moving

the line in front of him.

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Nods and continues.

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Laing Bitters.

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I'm glad he has agreed because

I can't have him looking for me.

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Tonight I go straight to the

boat and climb under the canopy.

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Now there's only one option for food.

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Wild forage.

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Hopefully the rest of my plan goes better.

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I get to work, fluffing my blankets and

arranging it so it looks like I'm under

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the covers, adding to the effect I stick

my shorn hair where my head should be.

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next I strip out of my tunic

and skirt, which I stuff along

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with my cloak into my bundle.

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I'm left in my small clothes,

a one piece top, and shorts.

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For a moment, I finger the

tattered flowers, Nona embroidered

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around the edge of the fabric.

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Would she approve of what I'm doing?

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I promised not to be rash.

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but I also promised to find the

jewels with a purse of my lips.

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I peek out from under the canopy.

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When I'm sure no one is watching,

I grab a cork vest from off the

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side of the boat and slip it on

with my staff over my shoulder.

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I drop silently into the water holding

the bundle on top of my head with one

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hand so I can swim with the other.

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The water is shockingly cold, and the

current's stronger than I expected.

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It's hard to swim and keep my bundle dry.

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For the love of rats, I panic.

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I'm going to miss the end of the dock.

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I take a desperate stroke, almost

dunking my bundle in the process.

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At the last moment, I managed to toss

the oil skin onto the wood planking

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and heave myself up behind it.

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This end of the dock is quiet and there

isn't a lantern close With my teeth

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chattering, I slip into my clothes

without delay, I move to the old boat.

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It's not in great condition, but

it floats, and there are oars and a

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bale bucket Quickly, I climb in and

untie the bow line without a sound.

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I let the boat drift down river on

the current until I'm far enough

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from the dock that no one will hear

the squeak of oars as I row away.

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Jackal.

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When I've calmed enough to sleep, I

climb onto the boat and sit on my tick.

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What I learned about my

mother has me in the pht mood.

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I've been in for quite some time.

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I wanted to take my anger out

on someone, and the girl was the

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easiest target when she poked her

head out from under the canopy.

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I pulled my rodents little romance

towards me and kissed him on the lips.

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When she ducked back

inside, I pushed him away.

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He wiped his mouth and looked

furious, but I waved him off.

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Go back to your bitters

before the taru gets mad.

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I told him.

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He stormed away.

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Frankly, I'm not sure why

the kiss wasn't half bad.

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I smirk even now as I remember

it, but only for a moment as a

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twinge of guilt washes over me.

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I am not fooled by the emotion

anymore and fished the jewel out

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of its pouch in my skirt pocket.

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As I touch.

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Its cool surface.

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Some of my anger slips away.

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I frown.

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No, you don't.

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I want to stay angry.

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It's the only way I'll survive.

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I return the stone to its pouch

and shove it deep in my pocket.

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Again.

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My rodent is sleeping soundly

in the back of the boat.

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I glance at her form.

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I will persuade her to help me find

the jewels and when the time is

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right, I'll leave her in the Norwood.

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It will work out fine.

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Brie, there is no moon to speak of, and

even the starlight is blocked by clouds.

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All I've got is my sense of hearing

to tell me where I am in the river.

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Thankfully, I recall weather saying

it was flat water from NS R to the

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first cataract which lies deep

in the heart of the Black Canyon.

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It should be all night and most

of tomorrow before I have to

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worry about the great falls.

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Even still, I strain my ears

for the sound of water on rock.

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terrified of coming upon

any waves in the dark.

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My insights turn to mush when I think

of running the Black Canyon alone,

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even the most experienced rivermen

occasionally flip in the cataracts,

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But weathers assured me that a

successful run is all in the setup.

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Surely if I scout the worst of the swift

water from shore, I'll get through.

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I do some figuring if I left the

dock around midnight and Jackal

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doesn't discover I'm gone until

I miss staff practice, that

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will give me a six hour lead.

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Even then, she'll have to wait at least

an hour for the banjara to break camp.

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That gives me seven hours to

reach the castle, find the

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jewels and head down river again.

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Can I do it that fast?

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I pull harder on the oars.

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What choice do I have?

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It rains on and off, but my

steady rowing keeps me warm.

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As the boat slices through

the black water, I think about

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gray and jackal and the kiss.

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Was it their first or one

of many My eyes sting.

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I don't care about jackal.

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She's Reagan thorn's daughter.

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How can I be surprised by anything she

does, but gray, I trusted him again,

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Jackal.

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I wake sometime in the

wee hours of the morning.

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It's dark and all is quiet,

but something is wrong.

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I feel it in my gut.

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I sit up and call to the girl.

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She doesn't move.

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I reach out to shake the sleeping

figure, but my hand sinks

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into the folds of her blanket.

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That's when I realized my mistake.

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It never crossed my mind.

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She would slip away without gray and

I kept an eye on him all night.

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In a rage.

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I scramble off the boat.

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The boy is sleeping under an oil

cloth on the dock on Kick him.

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Wake everyone up.

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Bri is gone.

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Chapter 33, Brie.

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I row, then row some more When

it's light enough to see, I

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search the boat hatches and find a

withered apple and some dried meat.

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I eat the apple.

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Thankfully, the rain stops.

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Before taking up the ORs again, I

add another notch to my staff,

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bringing the total to 16.

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16 days gone and I still only

have one Juul I start to row

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once more, determined not to stop

until I reach the first cataract.

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I'm feeling some fatigue, but overall

I'm impressed with my endurance

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falling into a rhythm I push on.

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The sun has reached its zenith and

started its downward journey before

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I'm too dogged to keep rowing my

hands are chaffed and my back aches.

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I stop to chew the dried meat

savoring the peppery flavor

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as the boat floats down river.

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Without planning it, my eyes drift closed.

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I've only been still for a

moment when I hear a flutter of

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wings as grim lands on the bow,

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He calls loudly.

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I don't move.

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The vision in my mind is too beautiful.

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I'm on a boat riding up a curling

wave, then crashing through

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the frothing white foam grim.

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Cause again, go away.

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I mumble The foam

clears and I'm in a cave.

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Silver glint of water

sparkle on stone walls.

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I see Bogdan's boat.

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There's another call.

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Leave me alone.

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I call out without opening my eyes.

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I don't want the dream to end.

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I'm about to find the amethyst.

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I know it.

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Grim cause two more

times, three more times.

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The vision disintegrates.

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I sit up blinking and confused.

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The sun has slipped below the canyon wall.

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The river is in shadow.

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How long did I sleep in the

distance I hear a low rumble?

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No, it couldn't be.

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I look downstream, but can't see

beyond the bend in the river.

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My heart begins to

thunder like a rainstorm.

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Nothing but the first cataract

would make that sound.

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I scramble to the oars and

begin pulling to shore.

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I need to see the swift

water before I run it.

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I've got to enter at just the right

place, or I'll never make it through.

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As I pull grim, squawks and flaps

his wings, raising a foot in the

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air, then landing on the deck again,

You could have woken me sooner.

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I say straining to reach

shore, grim squawks more,

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hopping up and down as he does.

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He's making such a ruckus that

I quit rowing and look at him.

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He stops instantly and looks back at me.

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I pull on the oars, and he squawks.

400

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I stop again.

401

:

You are crazy.

402

:

I'm not letting the boat float

through the swift water on its own.

403

:

Grim cock his head and

croaks deep in his throat.

404

:

The dream wasn't real.

405

:

I insist, but as I say the words,

I'm reminded of Marette calling

406

:

both Grim and the Hesperian Corvex.

407

:

Does the whisper speak to me through Grim?

408

:

I can't believe it yet.

409

:

The bird seems determined

to communicate something.

410

:

I recall weather saying that

Bog Dan's boat ran the swift

411

:

water without anyone rowing.

412

:

If I want to find the amethyst, should

I run the swift water the same way

413

:

Grim gives several quick cause

as if affirming my thought.

414

:

for the love of rats.

415

:

The idea is lunacy, but I find myself

believing it's true grim, or should

416

:

I say the whisper wants the boat

to float the cataract without help.

417

:

Grim did lead me to the Roker in Ns ran.

418

:

Maybe I should trust him.

419

:

I look longingly ashore, but sit still.

420

:

Grim stands on the front

deck, preening his tail.

421

:

Feathers calm as can be.

422

:

This gives me confidence.

423

:

The rumble of the cataract

gets louder still.

424

:

I continue to sit even when

I see the monstrous waves.

425

:

I stay composed.

426

:

The boat is just dropping down the

smooth water at the top of the falls.

427

:

When grim takes to the air and

flies away, Hey, I call after him.

428

:

What kind of chicken are you?

429

:

My confidence evaporates,

but it's too late.

430

:

I grip my handholds and brace my

legs, determine that no matter

431

:

what happens, I won't let go.

432

:

The boat plummets into the swift

water, picking up tremendous speed.

433

:

The fall is so steep, I'm afraid

I'll tumble out of my seat.

434

:

Down I go until the boat hits

the mass of churning water.

435

:

There is no time to catch a breath as the

boat is smashed, like a fly under a water.

436

:

Instantly.

437

:

My hands are ripped from my

holds Violent water envelops

438

:

me as I'm washed from the boat.

439

:

I open my eyes.

440

:

There's light above me, but

I'm going down, down, down.

441

:

I try with all my might

to swim for the surface.

442

:

My arms and legs thrashing.

443

:

I make no progress.

444

:

Soon.

445

:

My lungs feel like they'll explode.

446

:

The river won't let me go In

a panic, I flail harder, but

447

:

I'm in the grip of the current.

448

:

My lungs continue to burn.

449

:

If I don't get a breath soon, it hits

me Then that I might, actually die.

450

:

Blackness closes in around

the edges of my vision.

451

:

I stop struggling.

452

:

My body goes limp, Suddenly as

if the river is done with me,

453

:

I shoot towards the surface.

454

:

I anticipate breathing at any moment.

455

:

Instead, my head hits something hard.

456

:

I stifle the urge to suck in water as my

hands go up and I feel the rock above me.

457

:

I am under an overhang, which is blocking

the surface for the love of rats.

458

:

I need air.

459

:

Now with my hands overhead,

I frantically attempt to move

460

:

myself out from under the ledge.

461

:

Without warning, I pop up to the surface.

462

:

Air, glorious air.

463

:

I can breathe, but the

darkness around me is absolute.

464

:

I tread water as I spin in a whirlpool.

465

:

Something bumps me.

466

:

It's a log throwing my

arms over the sodden wood.

467

:

I hold on as I continue to turn.

468

:

At first, I'm so grateful to

breathe that I'm not afraid,

469

:

but as I spin, my fear grows.

470

:

Things I can't identify

bump me in the dark.

471

:

What if some other soul

got washed in here?

472

:

What if I come across a floating body?

473

:

I want to cry.

474

:

Why did I trust grim?

475

:

I should have rode the cataract

the way weather's taught me.

476

:

This is nothing like

the cave in my vision.

477

:

It was sparkling with light and there was

a ledge where the boat rested a ledge.

478

:

the thought gives me hope.

479

:

There may well be a ledge here somewhere.

480

:

It takes me a moment to gather my

courage, but I reach into the darkness.

481

:

What I feel isn't solid rock, but a

crumbling pile of sticks and debris.

482

:

Quickly, I pull my hand

back and try to think.

483

:

This underwater whirlpool is a

natural place for things to collect.

484

:

Who knows how long it's been here?

485

:

I do several more rotations before

reaching out to the pile again.

486

:

When I do, my hand digs into the

loose sticks, rotting leaves, and

487

:

whatever else has been washed in here.

488

:

. After a moment, I managed to

pull myself out of the water

489

:

and onto the mass of debris.

490

:

I grope around in the

darkness, not caring anymore.

491

:

If my hands come across

something repulsive.

492

:

Above me is solid rock.

493

:

I'm definitely in a cave at my side I find

a HU board about the length of my arm.

494

:

A board that could easily be

the sighting of a banjara boat.

495

:

I get hopeful as I find

some kind of framework.

496

:

This must be bogged Dan's boat

as I grope in the darkness.

497

:

I can tell that many boards are

gone, but many are still in place.

498

:

All the river gear, including the

oars, have been washed away, but my

499

:

fingers come across what feels like

a hatch cover that is still in place.

500

:

I am shivering so hard that my

fingers aren't working well, but

501

:

I manage to release the latch.

502

:

The lid comes away in my hand, the

leather hinges completely rotted through.

503

:

I reach in tentatively it

feels empty and my heart sinks.

504

:

But with more searching, I discover what

feels like a bean pot with a missing lid.

505

:

I plunge my hand inside and

find something hard, something.

506

:

I feel certain, even in the

pitch, black is the amethyst.

507

:

I clutch the lump to my chest and weight,

but as usual, there's nothing fine.

508

:

I say to the darkness, all

that matters is that I have it.

509

:

With shaking fingers, I place the

new stone next to the sapphire in

510

:

Nona shawl at my waist and double

check that the knot is secure.

511

:

That done, I sit in

the darkness shivering.

512

:

finding the amethyst is all well and

good, but now how do I get out of here?

513

:

After thinking for a while, I

come up with only one solution.

514

:

I've got to return the way I came.

515

:

The thought is horrifying, but

there is no other choice.

516

:

I kneel in the crumbling debris

next to the water and tell

517

:

myself to dive in, but I can't.

518

:

I almost died the last

time I was in the water.

519

:

My hand goes to the

New Stone in Nona Shaw.

520

:

I made the choice to let

the boat run the cataract.

521

:

Now, like it or not, I have

to suffer the consequences.

522

:

Just do it.

523

:

I command myself.

524

:

After feeling my lungs

with air, I dive in.

525

:

The water thrashes me, and I

can't control where I'm going.

526

:

For an interminable moment,

I'm held against a rock wall.

527

:

In the next moment, I'm

propelled downstream.

528

:

Finally, I pop up gasping for air.

529

:

My eyes dazzled by the light.

530

:

I am completely disoriented

until I see the boat bobbing

531

:

right side up along the shore.

532

:

I swim to it as fast as my sodden skirts

will let me and pull myself aboard.

533

:

I'm grateful to see that the boat is still

in one piece and both oars are in place.

534

:

I check that my bundle is in the hatch.

535

:

It is.

536

:

The only thing that appears

to be lost is the bale bucket.

537

:

I should have tied it to the

boat the way weathers does.

538

:

I grimace.

539

:

From now on, I'll be bailing

with Nona's Cook Pott.

540

:

Then it hits me.

541

:

Where's my staff?

542

:

Dread builds in my chest as I look

around, but the boat is empty.

543

:

The staff known a carved for me is gone.

544

:

Washed down river.

545

:

I slump in the cockpit.

546

:

Lost without it.

547

:

the boat still bobbing along the

shore knocks into a rock, then

548

:

it knocks again reluctantly.

549

:

I get up and tie a bow line

to a large boulder before any

550

:

damage is done to the boat.

551

:

Grim lands on a rock not far

away, and watches me in silence.

552

:

Stupid bird, I murmur.

553

:

You don't even care that

I nearly died back there.

554

:

Grim just blinks.

555

:

I turn away.

556

:

I'm done with the whisper.

557

:

I'll keep up my search, but

I'll never trust you again.

558

:

this reminds me of my find.

559

:

I dig the new lump out of Nona Shawl

and hold it up to the sunlight.

560

:

It is indeed the amethyst.

561

:

Its natural crystalline shape

extends the width of my palm.

562

:

The deep lavender runs from end

to end without a single flaw.

563

:

Grim squawks when he

sees it and flies away.

564

:

I can't help but think he wanted

to confirm that I had the amethyst

565

:

before acknowledging I survived.

566

:

Is that all the whisper cares

about finding the jewels?

567

:

Does it even matter what happens to me?

568

:

Annoyed.

569

:

I glance at the sky.

570

:

There couldn't be more than an

hour or two of daylight left.

571

:

Time is wasting.

572

:

I've got to find the castle.

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