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112. Raven Crown Chapter 25, 26 and 27
Episode 11210th April 2026 • Creative Spiritual Journey • Judy Cooley and Ghia Cooley
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A murdered guardian. A stolen sapphire. A raven with opinions.

Brie must gather the Jewels of Tambor—learning courage, cunning, and a strength she never knew she possessed—all while braving a twisted foot, a lack of trust, and impossible odds. Meanwhile, Dogmar, known as Jackal, will do anything to claim the throne—until a stolen jewel begins to unravel everything she believes about strength and survival.

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Chapter 25, Brie.

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While choosing which story to recite?

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I nervously tie a Robin

Feather into my hair.

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The question is, which

story do I know well enough?

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Nona told so many, several are decidedly

more famous than others, and the diggers

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may like them best, but that will also

ensure they recognize any mistakes.

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Even if I recite perfectly, do I have

the voice to hold their attention?

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I think of the silver shekels silver

ring expects me to earn and feel queasy.

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I don't want to be left

on shore in the morning.

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In the end, I decide the

Noona story is the safest.

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I know it best and it's fresh in my mind.

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After reciting it for gray time for Z

Start, Marette says her face beaming.

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The years have passed

since we ear a good teller.

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You are good with Z Corvex?

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No.

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She gestures towards grim

perched in the tree next to me.

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I have no idea what grim has to

do with my telling, but I shrug.

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I'm not as good as the teller.

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I learned from marette chuckles.

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I zinc.

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You do fine.

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She sets a tarnished teapot

in the sand before me.

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Then she announces that the

telling is about to begin.

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The diggers scattered around

the beach, gathered together.

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I stare at the teapot before realizing

it's there to hold the shekels.

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Marette expects the diggers to

leave me despite the chill in the

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air, my palms begin to sweat For

the love of rats can I do this?

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My mouth goes dry as the

diggers crowd together.

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What if they don't like me?

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What if they don't leave any coin?

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Will the taru refuse to let

me on the boat in the morning?

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My blood runs from my face.

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Marette pokes me Z.

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Time is now.

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She says In a cheery voice, I'm instantly

shaking with panic and look around.

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Longing for a place to hide.

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There was a short stout tree behind

me using my walking stick for support.

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I wobble to the tree and

climb into the low branches.

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Grateful for the comforting

bows, grim flaps to my shoulder

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and begins printing my hair.

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I would knock him away, but to be honest,

it feels good and I calm somewhat.

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Marette seems to approve of

my perch and gives a nod.

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I squeeze the branch I'm

sitting on and think of Nona.

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Is this why she told her

stories over and over?

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Did she suspect I would

become a teller someday?

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After a lengthy clearing of my

throat, I get the first words out.

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A Kona was the only child

of an elderly couple.

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My voice is weak, but I

manage to keep speaking

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and jackal.

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When I see the fear on my

rodents face, I almost feel

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sorry for her, but catch myself.

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These aren't my feelings.

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They belong to the Pero.

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I don't feel pity for anyone.

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That's how I survive.

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I begin to walk away.

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When I recognize my rodent

story, I look back and study her.

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Why did she choose the noona telling?

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Could it be to taunt me?

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Instead of leaving, I find a

place in the shadows to listen.

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Brie, it's hard to get the words

out, but I determine to keep going.

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I can't be left on shore in the morning.

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I recite the Na Kona story

as far as I got with gray.

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I think at best to stop at this

point anymore would be unrehearsed.

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But when I pause the few diggers

that haven't tired of my halting

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voice and walked away, look at me

expectantly, I've got to go on.

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After a deep breath, I continue.

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Noona grew old.

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except for the holy day.

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at the end of each week.

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She spent most of her time under the oak

bows providing judgements for the locals.

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One chilly morning a messenger appeared

at her door and told her that the

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Queen of Tambor requested an audience.

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Noona was surprised but answered

with her usual steadiness.

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I will hear her under the oak tree.

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The messenger looked insulted and

explained that the queen expected

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n Kona to travel to her court.

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The messenger was to

deliver n Kona at once.

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N Kona pondered this.

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She had never passed judgment nor given

advice anywhere except under her oak tree.

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Would she have peace

of mind anywhere else?

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I see those who seek my counsel

under the oak tree, and that's it.

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If she doesn't want to come here,

I'm sure she has other advisors

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who can help her with that.

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Noona closed the door.

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Many days passed, and Noona was

certain that the Queen had sought other

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counsel, but one afternoon a dark

haired woman in a fine cloak entered the

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courtyard even without her entourage.

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Noona knew who it was.

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Your wisdom is known throughout Tambo,

the Queen said in a clear, strong voice.

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Kono was surprised.

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Certainly she was known throughout

her own region, but the whole country,

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she raised an eyebrow in question.

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The queen went on to explain

that Tambor was in great peril.

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Warring forces were gathering on the

southern border with the ocean on one

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side and the mountains on the other.

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She feared that there was no

choice but to retreat to the far

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north or submit to foreign rule.

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Noona knew that retreating to the

north would devastate her people.

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The growing season was too short for a

decent crop, and the climate wouldn't

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allow much time for digging of gems.

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She looked directly at the Queen

and asked why she didn't defend

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the borders of the country.

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The queen held her hands open,

exclaiming that Tambor only had a

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small army, and that the invaders had

great wagons loaded with catapults.

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Nona considered this

news reaching deep inside.

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She waited for confirmation to

the answer, which she knew by

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instinct was the only solution.

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After time, she asked the queen if she

could hear the hesperian, the queen

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knit her brow together and said that

despite being of royal blood, she never

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felt much influence from the Hesper.

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Noona asked her if she was

honest and if she listened to

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the dictates of her own heart.

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The Queen bowed her head and said yes.

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Noona leaned forward on her stool

to get the queen's full attention

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and told her that it was imperative.

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She defend the borders

of Tambor at all costs.

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The Queen had not given noona this option.

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She had asked whether she

should retreat or submit.

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Defending the borders was pure

madness without a sizable army.

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The queen paced the courtyard.

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Eventually, she stopped before

noona and told her she would defend

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the borders on one condition.

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N Kona must ride with her to inspire the

men and to teach them of the hesperian.

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Kono was stunned.

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Leave her home, the oak, the

courtyard, and go to war at her age.

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But she knew without a doubt

that the border must be defended.

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And if it were better done

with her there, she would go.

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Noona and the queen took two

weeks to muster the diggers.

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There was no time to fashion more

than an occasional staff for weapons.

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The rest of the men were

armed with whatever.

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They had an ax, a pick,

a hammer, or a shovel.

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Noona and the queen gathered

their army on a hill giving them

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a slight advantage in the battle.

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The next day, Kona's heart

gave a momentary falter

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when she saw the invaders.

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So many well armed troops was she leading

the men of tambour to certain death.

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But her resolve returned

as she remembered.

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The counsel of the his defending

the border was the only option.

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my voice waves and I glance up to see that

much of my audience has wandered away.

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It's mostly children left who likely

don't have a shekel between them.

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but there's nothing I can do but gather

my thoughts and continue, So I do.

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as the sun sank behind the mountains.

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The rain began Through the night, it

beat down in an endless torrent Before

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first light Noona was up to rally the

sadden soldiers as the sky brightened

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and unexpected cheer went up from the

men bewildered, Noona looked around.

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what she saw in the valley

below, made her rejoice.

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Where there had once been an

invading army, There was now a

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raging torrent of mud and water.

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With the storm, the stream had flooded.

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Its Spanx.

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The majority of the invaders

had been washed away.

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Those men who remained clung to tree

branches or boulders halfway up the

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hillside, all the digger army had to

do was wait for the waters to recede

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and gather up the remaining invaders.

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Word of the victory spread quickly

throughout the country, and songs

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were sung in Praise of Noona.

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The mighty prophetess

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Noona refused to take any praise for

herself, insisting it was the will of

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the Hesper quietly and without fanfare,

she returned home and tried to resume

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her normal life, but after her great

adventure, things were never the same.

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She had seen the wider world and

despite her age, longed to see it again.

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She vowed that one day she would

travel the length and width of

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Tambor, but as the story goes,

noona never left her oak again.

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I pause for effect, then add the end.

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A few shackles are dropped

into the teapot, but not many.

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And jackal.

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I am relieved when my rodent finishes

her telling before the story is over.

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Thoughts of the ending

Make me uncomfortable.

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I wonder if she knows there's

more now that I think on it.

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I'm not sure how I even know.

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Trying to remember dredges up

memories of my childhood the

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first time I was inked for one.

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I drew the design myself with a stick of

charcoal in a corner where I was offered

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left for hours on finding the drawing.

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My father called the Roker and had him

tap the offending pattern into my skin.

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It's a creeping vine that wraps just

under my collarbone and around my back.

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But did this incident happen

before or after the Noona story?

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I can't recall.

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Bri Finished.

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I wait for the small

audience to wander off.

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Then I start the Noona story again.

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I'm afraid to recite anything

else without practice.

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Diggers come and go.

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Shekels are dropped in the teapot,

but I'm sure there aren't enough.

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At one point I noticed jackal and gray

slip past silver ring and out of the camp.

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as planned.

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They're going to the village to see if

anyone knows the whereabouts of Madox.

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I feel a pain of jealousy as

Gray walks off with jackal

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and lose track of my story.

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Several of the diggers walk away.

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I've still got a small group.

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When I see gray and Jack will return,

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gray comes over immediately and

stands at the back of the gathering.

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I can't concentrate with him

there and blotch my telling.

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No shackles are dropped into

the pot as the diggers leave.

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Gray comes forward.

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Madox was in town a few days ago.

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He whispers.

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There's a good chance

we'll catch him soon.

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Swamper silver ring calls to Gray.

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Where have you been?

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I need you to Lale, bitters go.

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I say We can't be left behind tomorrow.

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They might leave me, but not you.

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Your rowing was too good.

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He says with a wink.

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They'll keep you around just for that.

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I roll my eyes.

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You are just jealous because

you didn't get to row.

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That's not true.

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I love bailing.

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Gray says with a grin.

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Swamper silver ring calls again.

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I push on gray's chest.

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Go.

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Before leaving Gray bends down and

gives me a kiss on the top of my head.

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Good luck with your telling.

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He says, and walks away, My head

tingles where his lips touched me.

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Before I can stop, a secret

smile tickles my lips.

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Al pellets gray is worming

his way back into my heart.

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I can't help watching him as he ladles

bitters into a mug of aged cider.

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Jackal stops with an arm

load of dishes to chat with.

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Gray, of course, he's all smiles.

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She catches me staring and raises a brow.

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I look away and try to wipe the

feel of grace's Kiss off my head.

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Jackal, see my rodents eyes

shine as she stares at gray.

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I frown as I think of it.

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I've kissed a few boys.

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There's nothing my father could do about

it, but there's no hope of a serious

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relationship in my future as queen.

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Anyone I marry would be my consort.

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Of course, my father won't have that.

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He plans to hold the only seat at my side.

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A wave of jealousy rolls over me at my

rodents ability to have a normal life.

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I grit my teeth, I'll have those jewels

and live my own life no matter the cost.

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Brie, it's cold and most of the

diggers have left the beach before.

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Marette has me stop my telling.

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I slump with relief.

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I've never talked so long in my life.

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I feel like I've recited the

Noona story a hundred times.

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When Marette checks the

teapot, she clicks her tongue.

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I wonder how much I've

made, but she doesn't say.

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Eat Z's tonight, she drops a handful

of dill spiced crackers into my lap.

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Apparently I haven't earned enough for

dinner from Silver Ring on tomorrow.

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We make a few changes.

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Marette adds.

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I'm about to ask what changes When

grim tries to snatch a cracker.

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Hey, that's mine.

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I say shooing him away.

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Grinning Marette dumps the crumbs

from her pocket on the beach.

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Grimm flops down to investigate.

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Be careful if you start feeding him.

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He'll never leave you alone.

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I warn.

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Marette just chortles and

walks away swinging the teapot.

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I shrug, but feel a pang of worry.

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If Marette starts feeding grim, he may

decide he likes her better than me.

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would he switch his loyalties that easily?

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I'm not sure.

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I look around for gray and see him laing

bitters to the last diggers on the beach.

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He's wearing his usual sheep dog grin

And I think for a moment that he's

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remembering the kiss he gave me, then I

spot jackal at his side and turn away.

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Nevermind, I'm going to find my bed.

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Roll.

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I have just laid down when jackal

shows up, you are not sleeping here.

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She says, come with me.

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She walks away.

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I stare at her back wondering what

makes her think she's in charge.

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I don't move until she stops and

glares at me hands on her hips.

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I groan knowing I only have two

choices, argue or obey with a

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roll of my eyes, I get to my feet

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Leaning heavily on my staff.

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I taught her after her.

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maybe tomorrow I'll have the strength

to stand up to jackal tonight.

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I'm too tired.

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chapter 26, jackal.

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I don't really think my

rodent will run away still.

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I can't be too careful.

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She has already slipped through

my fingers twice and I would

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prefer to sleep without worry.

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So I've persuaded weathers to

let us sleep on his boat under

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one of the colorful canopies.

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The banjara have erected.

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The sides of the canopy have been pulled

down for warmth and privacy, Covering

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most of the deck in a tent of sorts.

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I light a straw from the lantern hanging

off the bow and take it into the tent

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With me there, I light two candles.

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Despite knowing that three or four

banjara will sleep in the other boats

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tonight, the canopy feels cramped.

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I don't like sharing my space.

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My rodent enters the tent behind me.

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Her staff in one hand, her ragged

bag in the other, ignoring her.

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I roll out an embroidered cotton tick

that I convince the banjara to lend me.

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It covers the front end of the deck.

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This will be my spot.

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I throw a red blanket to the back of

the boat and point You sleep there.

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This way, she can't get off

the boat without waking me.

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My rodent doesn't look happy as she

crawls to her spot, but she settles

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on the blanket like it's a nest.

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She'll stay put.

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I stripped down to my chamise

and sprawl on the tick.

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My knives are within easy

reach and I feel safe enough.

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The girl can't wield her staff in here.

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I lean over to blow out the

candles, but catch her intent eyes

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on me, not my face, but my ink.

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I decide to let her look.

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While I detest the ink,

I can see its beauty.

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the design is intricate and

mostly comprised of vines.

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But here and there are

other things as well.

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Roses dropping their petals.

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A dog slinking among the leaves,

the eight phases of the moon.

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My father ordered it all.

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Of course, I never wanted any of it.

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I'm always sick after a

session on the Kroger's table.

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The one concession I've been allowed

is to choose where I'm inked.

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I've insisted on locations I can cover

preferring to hide my father's handiwork.

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Still, I suppose the old Kroger will be

pleased to know that his skill is being

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appreciated, especially as my father

recently had him relieved of duty.

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The Kroger was quite a renowned artist.

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I say absently.

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As soon as I've spoken,

I realized my mistake.

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Why would a tethered girl

have such expensive ink?

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I scrambled to change the

subject light on a question

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I was already planning to ask.

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What prompted you to tell the Noona story?

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The girl looks down.

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It was the only one I

thought I could get through.

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She mumbles.

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Why didn't she finish it?

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Her eyes dart to mine.

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Obviously surprised by my question.

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It didn't seem fitting

for the festive mood.

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She says so she knows there's more.

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recite it for me.

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I say with more force than intended.

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My rodent rubs her face.

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I'm too tired.

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I want to grab her scrawny neck and shake

it for refusing me, but I know better.

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And try to be more tactful.

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Please.

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It will help me sleep.

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She doesn't move, and I think maybe

my ploy won't work, but with another

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sigh, she begins gullible knit wit,

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After the flood washed

away the invading army.

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noona, wanted nothing

more than to return home.

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My rodent says, I lean back curious to see

if her version of events matches my own.

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The Queen gave Noona a horse, two

saddlebags full of food, one of her

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own maps and a letter insuring her

lodging anywhere in the country.

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After a full day of writing, Noona arrived

weary and saddle soar at one of Tambor's

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Great Houses, A young maid letter in.

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It wasn't until Noona had entered the

Great Hall that she realized there were

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no other servants anywhere in the house.

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She asked the maid where they

were, but all the maid would say

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was that the servants had fled,

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Noona wanted answers, but before she

could ask, a whale filled the hall.

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The maid stammer, as she explained

that Noona had arrived at a bad time.

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Her mistress, lady Fallon, was in labor.

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Noona told the girl that in fact she had

arrived at just the right time, sending

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the girl for clean linens and hot water.

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Noona marched upstairs and found Lady

Fallon deep in the throes of labor.

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Her face pale and sweating.

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Noona could see it was a breach birth

and worked for hours to turn the baby.

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Finally, the mother was

too weak to push anymore.

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Noona was at a loss and feared

both mother and child would die.

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She dropped to the floor with her face

tilted to heaven and begged the hesper to

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give the woman strength to save her child.

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At the end of Una's prayer, lady

Fallon opened her eyes seeing

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the young maid at her side.

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She grabbed the girl's hand and

asked if she loved her mother.

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The maid nodded.

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When I'm gone, take my baby to her.

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There is money for her.

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Keep in that chest.

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before the maid could protest, lady Fallon

let out a cry and gave another push.

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Noona caught the girl child as

she emerged before she could

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present the child to her mother.

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Lady Fallon passed through the veil

here, my rodent pauses to look at me.

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I do my best to show no emotion.

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Not because I'm shocked at the turn of

events, but because I'm broiling inside.

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There is more to the story than the girl

is telling me she's leaving things out.

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Doesn't she know the true

events or is she testing me?

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I have no way of knowing I hold

her gaze until she continues.

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it wasn't until n Kona had the baby

sucking on the tip of a cow's horn filled

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with milk that she pressed the maid

about where the other servants had gone.

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The young maid hesitated, but the

burden of what she knew was too much.

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She explained that the master

of the castle had left the week

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before to join the upcoming battle.

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The servant suspected he'd been

helping the invading army, that he

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hoped the invaders would prevail.

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It was rumored that he had made a

bargain to ensure he got all the

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trading rights at the end of the war.

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The maid looked around nervously, but

noona assured her they were alone.

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So the girl went on the night

before last, the captain of the

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invading army had shown up at the

castle, wet and covered with mud.

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demanded that the mistress

give him a place to stay.

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The mistress relented.

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The maid hesitated again before

explaining that there was screaming

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in the middle of the night.

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in the morning.

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When the other servants were

hurriedly packing to leave, she

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learned that there had been a murder.

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Noona studied the maid.

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It was obvious she was badly

shaken, yet she hadn't left.

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Why?

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The girl answered like

it was plain to sea.

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She couldn't leave her mistress

with the baby on its way.

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Noona then asked where

the captain had gone.

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This set the maid to shaking.

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Tell me.

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Noona insisted.

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Without saying a word, the maid

stood and pulled back a curtain that

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walled off a corner of the room.

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Nona was sickened at the site.

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The captain lay on the floor with a

poker from the hearth through his chest.

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Calmly Nik cajoled the events from

the maid after dinner the captain

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had set to drinking Later that

night, lady Fallon caught him rifling

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through her husband's belongings.

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A struggle ensued.

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Lady Fallon tried to barricade herself

in her rooms, but the captain blocked

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the door desperate to defend herself.

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Lady Fallon had run him

through with the poker.

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The strain had brought on the baby.

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Stop.

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I blurred out, unable

to hear another word.

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The girl looks startled

at my interruption.

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You've got it wrong.

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I kiss.

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First of all, lady Fallon's baby died, and

second, there was a little girl and her

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nurse at the castle that night as well.

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How would you know?

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The rodent asks, clearly not believing me.

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I glare at her.

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It's none of your business.

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A Chapter 27, Brie jackal, blows out

the candles and refuses to explain how

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she could know anything about the night.

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Lady Fallon died.

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I fall asleep certain she's

mistaken before dawn.

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Grims loud.

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Call startles me awake.

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Afraid he'll rouse the whole camp.

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I decide it's best to get up.

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Besides a little staff practice

would stretch out my foot

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Before leaving the back of the

boat, I carve another notch in my

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staff bringing the count to nine.

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the moon is already more than a

quarter gone and I only have one stone.

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Something needs to go right and

soon, or I'll never make it to

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Ultan before the coronation.

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With my staff in hand, I crawl

towards the bow of the boat, hoping

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to get off without disturbing jackal.

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In a flash, there's a hand at my

throat and I'm flung on my back.

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What are you doing with the air?

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Knocked out of my lungs.

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I can't answer.

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I said, what are you doing?

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The hand tightens?

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I thought a little staff

practice would loosen up my foot.

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I managed to croak.

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There's a long pause

before the hand releases.

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Oh, sorry.

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Jackal says, giving me

a pat on the shoulder.

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I was about to get up as well.

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She rolls away and begins

pulling on her clothes.

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I scramble off the boat and

drop to the sand in a crouch.

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Did she really just try to strangle me?

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Gray sees me from his bed roll on

the beach and jumps to his feet.

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Raven, are you all right?

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I want to tell him his stupid

friend just tried to ring my

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neck, but gray isn't likely to

believe anything bad about jackal.

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He'll say it was an accident that

I startled her to keep it simple.

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I fib.

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just a twinge in my foot.

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I say gray grunts and yawns.

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There is a clamor as

jackal climbs off the boat.

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I want to join your staff practice.

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She says, I blink in response.

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She just tried to kill me a moment ago.

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Now she's acting all chummy.

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I'll join you as well.

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Gray Ads.

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I look between the two of

them wanting to protest.

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I prefer practicing alone,

but they both look determined.

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I roll my eyes and give in.

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All right.

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Go find a staff.

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I say with a wave towards the woods while

they search for an appropriate branch.

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I work through a very modified

routine, careful to only put a

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small amount of weight on my foot.

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Overall, I'm doing better than

yesterday, but I'm afraid I

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won't be back to normal for some

time when gray and jackal return.

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Neither has found a very good stick,

but they join me just the same.

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Gray hasn't done a staff

routine since before.

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Well before he was sent away.

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He's awkward at first, but

it comes back to him quickly.

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despite knowing it's a mistake, I

feel myself warming to him again.

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Clearly, jackal has never worked through

a staff practice, you're doing fine.

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I say with forced enthusiasm.

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Before I can turn away, she throws

down her stick, Tell me how to do

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better or don't say anything at all.

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Then she looks sheepish.

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I mean, please help me improve.

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It takes me a moment to

gather my thoughts, but I

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purse my lips known as style.

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Fine.

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If jackal really wants

to learn, I'll teach her.

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Show me that last move again.

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I say Jackal executes the move more.

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Bend in the knees, elbows up.

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Do it again.

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She does.

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Do it again.

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I bark again.

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I'm just getting good at ordering jackal

around when Marette appears at my side.

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Zm is good, but Z Corvex

needs a few pointers.

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No, she says her eyes twinkling.

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with a snap.

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She produces the same style

of staph used by Nas Mabu.

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Well, now we know why we

haven't seen a single staff.

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Among the Banjara.

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I hear jackal mutter to gray.

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Marette proceeds to walk

me through a routine.

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While her technique is similar to Nona's,

she teaches me a few subtle differences

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that incorporate my awkward gait.

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Practice Z moves in a few days.

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I show you more.

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Marette begins to walk away than she

turns back, And my little corvex.

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Don't forget that, just like Z Boat,

extra strength comes with the growl.

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She winks at me, then leaves.

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I stare at Mart's, retreating back.

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surely her old bones are too

fragile to win a staff fight,

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but she seems to know the craft.

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I'm impressed.

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We're going through the routine again

when the Tauk and a few of the other

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banjara climb off their boats yawning.

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when silver ring appears, practice

is over, Jackal rubs her arms

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as she walks to her duties.

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I watch her go In the end,

she did quite well, probably

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better than I did my first time.

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I think Nona would've liked her.

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A strong warm arm slips over my shoulder

and my insides go soft as a jellyfish.

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That was good.

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Grace says, I shrug, assuming

he's referring to my staff work.

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You actually carried on a

civil conversation with jackal.

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I roll my eyes.

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I wouldn't call barking orders.

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Civil, Gray shrugs.

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I'm glad your foot is better.

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I bet if you had a boot, you'd

be walking like yourself again.

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I notice he doesn't say walking

normally again, because I

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never walk normally, do I?

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I slip out from under

his arm and get to work

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While the others do their

morning chores, I sit alone and

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practice for tonight's telling.

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I need something I'm confident

with besides the Noona story.

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as I work the intoxicating

smell of porridge.

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Fried in bacon, fat WAFs through camp.

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My stomach rumbles will silver ring.

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Let me eat today for that matter.

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Will she let me on the boat this morning?

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Girl?

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The voice causes me to jump.

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I turn to see silver ring herself.

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her dark eyes narrow as she looks at me.

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You can join us for the morning

meal, but only because Marette

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insists I give you another chance.

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You must do better tonight.

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:

Without saying more, she walks away.

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she is almost across the beach

when grim swoops low through

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camp, letting out a shrill C,

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All the Banjara watch as

he peres on my shoulder.

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Thanks.

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I whisper.

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Perhaps his arrival will remind silver

ring that I'm not an ordinary swamper.

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I have a corvex.

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Not that grim belongs to anyone.

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The sun has just risen above the trees

when the boats are finally packed.

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There were a few clouds in the

sky, but it looks to be good

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weather as the Banjara board.

579

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Gray asked the taru if he

can ride with weathers.

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No.

581

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The uch says, without seeming to consider

the question, Gray looks disappointed

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as he gives me a pat on the shoulder.

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I was hoping to ride with you today.

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He says, likely story.

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I mumble.

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Al Betty's just sick of bailing and

wants weathers to teach him how to row.

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